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The first one, seems like she is talking. I don't know if it is me, but her position of her mouth seems unnatural. I think it needs to be place slightly upper.
The is not much different for the second and third one, only the second expression I think, is disappointed or sad. The third one is obviously a happy expression, judging by the smile.
Overall, I think this is good. So basically for this sprite, she has a small mouth and thin lips, which exist in reality too.
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Here is a quick image to illustrate what I mean and I couple demonstrations on stylisation that may help with your options.
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