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#1 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

HanaMori wrote:
Chorvaqueen wrote:/randomidea

post your oldest surviving drawing then put it on a comparison with your latest or in increments of x years
Maybe this is a little out of topic but... maybe someone should make a thread for this as well. It would be interesting.
I'll bite. Here's mine. It's not my oldest work, but of the same year (I couldn't find the REALLY old ones, and I remember being really proud of this one) and the last image I put a fair bit of effort into. I have pretty much only been doing VN work this year so ho hum.
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VN work from this year:
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#2 Post by JustAnotherMe »

Kind of interesting!!
Well, I don't keep my 'really' old work. It's all on paper and I put it in the trash whenever I get the chance.
This one I made about... 3 years ago? 3 and a half I think. A comic I made and saved on my laptop. Don't mind the language. ^_^
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As for now, you can see my works in my art dumpage.
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#3 Post by TsukiShima »

Yes, you heard our wish. It's actually really inspiring to see how the amazing artist was once on my level too. And seriously Auro, you're one of them. It's really amazing how much you can improve after those many years.

I was searching for my really older sketches, but I guess it's already in my storage and this is all I can find for now.
My drawing 5 years ago.
My drawing 5 years ago.
Haha, this is one of the drawing that I did with gel pen, I never found that pen that was made for inking and drawing. The story was great, yes I've ended it, in my head. I never finished the comic due to lack of confidence and I thought my art skills wasn't that good. Yet I wished I could show it to the world, so I turned it into a story in form of literature.
Another comic of the same story 4 years ago.
Another comic of the same story 4 years ago.
The same story as above, but my art skills improved a little. However it was never complete because I like how it was. My confidence towards my own arts is really low. Maybe one day I'll do a remake of this comic because I really cherish it.

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This, is now, not much improvement though. Atleast I'm still learning from my mistakes ^^"
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#4 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

@Hanamori. Awww, thanks ^_^ Yes, we all start somewhere. I am glad I improved and looking at my old work makes me wince. Though I remember being so happy with myself, so I guess it is rather relative.

I found one of my older ones from earlier 2004... it's really bad XD
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#5 Post by KomiTsuku »

Ooooooo... As many people might have heard, I retired from art. However, when I first started, it turned out something like this... Both of these were quick pencil sketches, so I ended up turning the contrast up so they are a little better to see.
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versus my latest work...
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Now you all can experience first hand why I don't do art anymore. There has been improvement, but not to an acceptable level. I devote too much energy to the other aspects of VN making to keep trying. (For the record, there is a four year difference between the two.) Of course, I drew them both in 5 minutes, so that may have something to do with it.

Edit: Random thought to myself, this debunks my internal argument that old Yoi had short hair. Completely forgot the original one had long hair as well.

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#6 Post by Chorvaqueen »

hurr


I actually raided the dusty drawers and here's what I've found. Not sure on the exact dates though.

YMMV on the styles I've done though. I'm notorious for shifting to a lot of styles even now.

[edit]map1 added though I made that a few months ago
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#7 Post by Omnificent »

I wish I could find you my really terrible stuff from like 2002, but I made the mistake of purging my old DevArt to obliterate that stuff forever. So instead you get my competent-ish stuff from early 2008 onwards.

2008

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2009
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2010
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2011
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In conclusion, I've gotten a little worse since 2009/I don't have the tablet/scanner access I did in 2009 and my art reflects this. On the plus side, I've gotten enough pen proficiency that when I get a scanner again, things should be fairly baller.
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#8 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

Uhh, this is the oldest work I can find....
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It was done when I was in... err... Grade six. 2009. I know there's older crap at the deepest delves in my drawer. But then, I know they look so painful in the eyes, so I'll save you from the sight.
Why did I think that this drawing looks so pretty before? After two years of not seeing it, I'm like "FUUUU I REALLY DREW THIS?"

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#9 Post by 15385bic »

my drawings usually go missing a few a few months Q.Q
but i've improved so slowly over the years since i dont draw that much T^T
the oldest pic i have in my gallery i actually like more than some of my now pics (sure she's long and gangly but i still do that sometimes O_o
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11/04/05 <---2005
Although i knew ZILCH about colouring
actually still have problems colouring but my detailing has improved when i want it to be
Image <--2011
Image <--2011


although funnily enough - someone has a pic on DA thats mine thats not even that great but has so many bloody comments and favs. Do i feel ripped off? yes i do
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http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&secti ... to#/dh9m0z

and the original?
mine submited a month before
http://www.theotaku.com/wallpapers/view ... tised%2521

and no matter how many times people comment that its stolen - Its still there - with more stupid comments about the cuteness after =_='

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#10 Post by Niki »

@15385bic
Woah! o_o Even in that old pic, I can tell you have a great eye for detail...
And about the art theft thing, you should report the deviation! >< Perhaps the admins can forcefully take it down.

I wouldn't call mine an improvement, lol... It's drastic enough to be an evolution >< I've been drawing semi-seriously for eight years but my stuff only became *cough* presentable *cough* in 2010.
The one on the left is from early 2010 while the one on the right was done some time this month. Anything I drew before 2010... doesn't exist. Because I killed all of it. With fire.
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Black Jack 2010 VS Black Jack 2011
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Aah my old art is so ugly ;w; Looking at it, I really feel I improved, even if it's just a bit...
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#11 Post by Tag- »

Well, I don't have any of my reallllly old pictures to show, but I have one of my first picture with a tablet:
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And now, five months later:
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#12 Post by Deji »

I'm jealous, you all improve so fast! XD;
I feel so old and slow "Orz

I found something super old (and embarrassing, of course) that I had scanned and uploaded on my old photobucket account! Probably from around... 1999-2000? I was in highschool at that time
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I did some digital coloring at the time and even prior that, but that stuff is lost forever ( thank God xD; )
Probably all the digital stuff from 2000 to 2003 is either lost forever due computer stolen or badly formatted hard drives, and the surviving stuff is on an old scratched CD somewhere...

OH WAIT. FOUND SOMETHING.
http://deji.ishtera.net/blog/?p=55
*hides under a rock*

Improvement chart from 2003 to 2009: http://fav.me/d2gs0tc

For each year from 2003 to now (hard to pick just one >_< ):
2003: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/Comi ... nd-3519868
2004: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/RO-T ... on-9292946
2005: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/FMA- ... t-21838018
2006: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/BTI- ... t-39659000
2007: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/Vinc ... g-67633628
2008: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/Isht ... p-89383353
2009: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/0907 ... -130267338
2010: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/Jise ... -166309344
2011: http://dejichan.deviantart.com/art/Isht ... -262423688
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#13 Post by GeneDNC »

Niki wrote: Black Jack 2010 VS Black Jack 2011
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+100 internets for the awesome bishi Black Jack! ^__^

And @15385bic, I agree, you really should report stolen art to the site admins, because that's really not on for that person to get credit for your work.

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#14 Post by sake-bento »

Uwa...this thread is so cool to look at. I'm not really much of an artist, but here's a comparison of my sketches anyway:
artchange.jpg

My boyfriend and I do a lot of collab art. He draws, I color. Here's a timeline of our work:
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I think it's kind of cool to see both of us improving together.

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#15 Post by SketchurnalVisuals »

Oh goodness, this is going to embarrass me so very much. I apologize if I make your eyes bleed...
This is the earliest I could find, and it's from February 2004:
(I seriously thought I had some amazing talent and that this was the best thing ever...)
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This is when I started to do the whole anime-style thing from February 2005:
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This is from April 2009:
(It's not the first of my tablet work, but I think I've embarrassed myself enough with that first picture.)
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This is from July 2011:
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This is from October 2011:
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Oh! I lied. This is the earliest I could find from either late 1999 or early 2000:
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I'm starting to wonder why I've held onto such old and horrible work. Eh, well, I'm going to say I've improved.

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