My new manga project

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My new manga project

#1 Post by Gouka » Fri May 29, 2009 6:51 pm

Well, here's a sample of my new manga project by my studio AtelierEdge. Take note that it is still incomplete and more corrections and effects need to be drawn in.
Please, write a helpful critique

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Check this link: http://atelieredge.wordpress.com/2009/0 ... mple-page/
it directs to my blog so I guess there won't be any trouble.
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Check the Chaos Lord development at http://atelieredgeproductions.wordpress.com

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Re: My new manga project

#2 Post by PyTom » Fri May 29, 2009 10:29 pm

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Re: My new manga project

#3 Post by DaFool » Sat May 30, 2009 4:03 am

It looks like Gouka hasn't resolved that issue with the host.

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Re: My new manga project

#4 Post by Gouka » Sat May 30, 2009 2:50 pm

That's weird. On imagevenue the link is tagged for all ages. No other board where I posted this subject gave this problem.
But given this problem here's an alternate link:
http://atelieredge.wordpress.com/2009/0 ... mple-page/
Check the Chaos Lord development at http://atelieredgeproductions.wordpress.com

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Re: My new manga project

#5 Post by sake-bento » Mon Jun 01, 2009 4:11 pm

I like it so far. Backgrounds and scenery are by and large some of the most underrated and difficult things to draw. I think a little toning would help, but it look really nice.

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