Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#16 Post by Snow Blossom » Mon May 16, 2011 7:41 pm

Lolita_Soft wrote:Same pic, different styles of coloring XP
Whoot, it's Allen~ :)
I prefer the second one though; the shading seems more subtle, while the contrast isn't lost.

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#17 Post by Lolita_Soft » Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:49 pm

Long time no post, I've got quite a few pics built up ^_^;;
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Tendershipping <3 I can't tell if I like how this came out or absolutely hate it...
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Thank you page for my BL comic "Strange". Too lazy to color DX
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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#18 Post by 15385bic » Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:55 am

I like your colouring =D
prefer the softshade ones more

and agree with - ur last pic looks the best
keep it up

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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#19 Post by LVUER » Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:40 pm

I like your drawing... but I don't know why, but I don't really like how you draw the mouth (perhaps because they're all angled in strange way?) It's not that bad (and perhaps it's your art style), I just feel uncomfortable looking at the mouth.
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#20 Post by Lolita_Soft » Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:23 pm

LVUER wrote:I like your drawing... but I don't know why, but I don't really like how you draw the mouth (perhaps because they're all angled in strange way?) It's not that bad (and perhaps it's your art style), I just feel uncomfortable looking at the mouth.
Hmmm, I've never noticed that befor (maybe becuase I'm used to drawing it like that?) Maybe I should work on makeing the mouths look more natural.
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#21 Post by LVUER » Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:27 pm

Well, if you want that as your art style, it's up to you to change it or not. Though it doesn't hurt to practice and able to draw normal/natural looking mouth.
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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#22 Post by Snow Blossom » Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:26 pm

I like the way you shade the clothes *A*

For the first pic (tendershipping?), the white-haired guy/girl's (can't tell, sorry >3<) nose is kind of long, but the hair is great ^^

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#23 Post by Lolita_Soft » Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:19 pm

I have a habit of disapearing :I
I'm back now, have some more art!
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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#24 Post by Cidz » Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:29 pm

Wow, those are awesome. You've improved greatly since you first made this thread. Keep up the work. I really like your coloring as well so pretty <3
i like the broken doll too with the stuffed bears its an interesting concept.

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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#25 Post by JustAnotherMe » Sun Nov 06, 2011 12:12 pm

I... I must try to learn from you! I especially must learn to color hair!!! Those strands of hair!! >=< Your coloring is sooo goooodddd!!!! TAT
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