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Please tell me what you think!

Warning! I know nothing of art theory or the sort!

I love the first one. It's just all sorts of awesome. The only thing I would change is to add a tiny bend in her right elbow to give more sense of movement.

The second one is cool too, but I can't figure out what you were trying to do with the expression and she looks like she's off balance but trying really hard to hold her pose.

Not bad, though could use some correction...
One note though... from your username, I kinda hope finding some loli art. But after I opened your thread... "WHERE'S THE LOLI!!!" ToT

I raise a motion that LVUER should inherit my old title of "King of the Lolies"

On that note too, I was expecting loli art as well when I opened this thread... Ya know, for someone who proclaims herself Lolita Soft, the drawing style really isn't what you expect!

More~

If you don't mind critique...

Colouring is good. But what happened with anatomy? Especially with their heads







Also your demon girl at firs post is crying. She is in pain D:

I'm sorry if I was too rude.

@YonYonYon

I don't mind your first and third critiques, but the second one is Panty and Stocking w/Garterbelt style after all, it IS sort of alien like stylistically

Select + transorm = much better result





English is not my native language... So I'll show you what I think is right

YonYonYon wrote:If you don't mind critique...

Colouring is good. But what happened with anatomy? Especially with their heads

No offense, but you outlined a part that seems clearly not a part of her head in the picture.

@ Greeny
Is that so? Well, it may be

Hmm...first of all, I thought this thread has a "LOLI ART"...but to my dismay there is none.... I guess i kinda misunderstood the thread. The first picture is good, but as for the second one, i think you should consider about the perspecctive that you are going to use. Because from my point of view, it's like she doesn't know where to face. It's like this: Her face, it is either you wanted her to face sidewards or upwards but I think that the way you drew it is quite poor. The face anatomy somehow is incorrect. Then, as for the upper body, *ahem...her breast looks like somewhat weird because of the way you drew the cloth foldings. But i think, if you could fix those corrections, your drawing may improve.

I hope you don't find my criticisms too harsh or take it negatively, i just think that you could do better

Same pic, different styles of coloring XP

Lolita_Soft wrote:Same pic, different styles of coloring XP

I really like your soft shading picture.

the clothing's colors are really good.