Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~
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Warning! I know nothing of art theory or the sort!
I love the first one. It's just all sorts of awesome. The only thing I would change is to add a tiny bend in her right elbow to give more sense of movement.
The second one is cool too, but I can't figure out what you were trying to do with the expression and she looks like she's off balance but trying really hard to hold her pose.
I love the first one. It's just all sorts of awesome. The only thing I would change is to add a tiny bend in her right elbow to give more sense of movement.
The second one is cool too, but I can't figure out what you were trying to do with the expression and she looks like she's off balance but trying really hard to hold her pose.
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Not bad, though could use some correction...
One note though... from your username, I kinda hope finding some loli art. But after I opened your thread... "WHERE'S THE LOLI!!!" ToT
One note though... from your username, I kinda hope finding some loli art. But after I opened your thread... "WHERE'S THE LOLI!!!" ToT
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I raise a motion that LVUER should inherit my old title of "King of the Lolies"
On that note too, I was expecting loli art as well when I opened this thread... Ya know, for someone who proclaims herself Lolita Soft, the drawing style really isn't what you expect!
On that note too, I was expecting loli art as well when I opened this thread... Ya know, for someone who proclaims herself Lolita Soft, the drawing style really isn't what you expect!
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It's interesting to see you're trying a variety of styles.
Maybe soon you'll find the one that you feel most comfortable with and the style will become more constant. ^^
For now you're showing really nice works- keep it up!!!
Maybe soon you'll find the one that you feel most comfortable with and the style will become more constant. ^^
For now you're showing really nice works- keep it up!!!
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I don't mind your first and third critiques, but the second one is Panty and Stocking w/Garterbelt style after all, it IS sort of alien like stylistically
I don't mind your first and third critiques, but the second one is Panty and Stocking w/Garterbelt style after all, it IS sort of alien like stylistically
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No offense, but you outlined a part that seems clearly not a part of her head in the picture.
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Hmm...first of all, I thought this thread has a "LOLI ART"...but to my dismay there is none.... I guess i kinda misunderstood the thread. The first picture is good, but as for the second one, i think you should consider about the perspecctive that you are going to use. Because from my point of view, it's like she doesn't know where to face. It's like this: Her face, it is either you wanted her to face sidewards or upwards but I think that the way you drew it is quite poor. The face anatomy somehow is incorrect. Then, as for the upper body, *ahem...her breast looks like somewhat weird because of the way you drew the cloth foldings. But i think, if you could fix those corrections, your drawing may improve.
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Same pic, different styles of coloring XP
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Ohooo~ Cell-shading VS soft-shading! That's really nice! >w<
Though I think you need some darker shadows on the first one, or it looks like it has some weird lighting.
Though I think you need some darker shadows on the first one, or it looks like it has some weird lighting.
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Lolita_Soft wrote:Same pic, different styles of coloring XP
I really like your soft shading picture.
the clothing's colors are really good.
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