Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

[Snow Blossom]

Same pic, different styles of coloring XP

Whoot, it's Allen~
I prefer the second one though; the shading seems more subtle, while the contrast isn't lost.

[Lolita_Soft]

Long time no post, I've got quite a few pics built up ^_^;;

[15385bic]

I like your colouring =D
prefer the softshade ones more

and agree with - ur last pic looks the best
keep it up

[LVUER]

I like your drawing... but I don't know why, but I don't really like how you draw the mouth (perhaps because they're all angled in strange way?) It's not that bad (and perhaps it's your art style), I just feel uncomfortable looking at the mouth.

[Lolita_Soft]

I like your drawing... but I don't know why, but I don't really like how you draw the mouth (perhaps because they're all angled in strange way?) It's not that bad (and perhaps it's your art style), I just feel uncomfortable looking at the mouth.

Hmmm, I've never noticed that befor (maybe becuase I'm used to drawing it like that?) Maybe I should work on makeing the mouths look more natural.

[LVUER]

Well, if you want that as your art style, it's up to you to change it or not. Though it doesn't hurt to practice and able to draw normal/natural looking mouth.

[Snow Blossom]

I like the way you shade the clothes *A*

For the first pic (tendershipping?), the white-haired guy/girl's (can't tell, sorry >3<) nose is kind of long, but the hair is great ^^

[Lolita_Soft]

I have a habit of disapearing :I
I'm back now, have some more art!

[Cidz]

Wow, those are awesome. You've improved greatly since you first made this thread. Keep up the work. I really like your coloring as well so pretty <3
i like the broken doll too with the stuffed bears its an interesting concept.

[JustAnotherMe]

I... I must try to learn from you! I especially must learn to color hair!!! Those strands of hair!! >=< Your coloring is sooo goooodddd!!!! TAT