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I can give Grammar Correction and other help

#1 Post by Wright1000 » Sat Apr 16, 2011 2:29 am

Before releasing your game or story or whatever, if you think you have made any grammar or spelling mistakes, send me the script and I will correct your grammar as soon as I can. I will do this for free but please credit me in your project.

I can also help you if you want any improvement in your story.

They say "Do not judge a book by it's cover." But that does NOT mean we should not make our main menus beautiful.
If you are not good in creating main menus, you can contact me for that too.

email: wrightrobinson1@gmail.com
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#2 Post by clannadman » Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:09 pm

Maybe you could link some example main menus you have created

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#3 Post by papillon » Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:26 pm

If you are not good in creating main menus
This is not a reassuring phrase to see when you're offering people grammatical services. :)

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#4 Post by Wright1000 » Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:09 am

See my game "Finding A Murderer".
I am learning to use photo shop and that is the reason I can help with main menus.
See the main menu of my game "Crime Investigation" which will be released soon.
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#5 Post by Wright1000 » Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:10 am

papillon wrote:
If you are not good in creating main menus
This is not a reassuring phrase to see when you're offering people grammatical services. :)
The phrase is grammatically correct.
It may not be stylish but I did not say that I can make your writing stylish.
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#6 Post by clannadman » Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:59 am

'creating main menus' isn't a subject in itself

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#7 Post by Applegate » Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:03 pm

To be fair, "to be good in" isn't necessarily bad form per se, although it is more common to use the phrase "good at" when indicating you are good at doing a specific something.

I would be more concerned with "do not judge a book by it's cover", which when dissected would state, "Do not judge a book by it is cover". :-)

That said, could you provide an example of your skill, whether by photographic evidence or text documents detailing the "before" and "after" state of a specific piece of writing?

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#8 Post by Wright1000 » Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:40 am

I told you. You can play the game "Finding A Murderer." It was created by me alone.
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#9 Post by SilverxBlue » Wed Apr 20, 2011 10:57 pm

I think what Applegate meant was you should have a certain essay,story or whatever that you edited put up, showing both the "before" state, (The one where you haven't touched it.) and the "after" state. (What it looks like after you edited it.)
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#10 Post by Wright1000 » Thu Apr 21, 2011 12:49 am

I am sorry I can't show any essays.
But if there is anyone here who lives in India, they will find my articles (not essays) in Indian Newspapers.
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