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For recruitment of team members to help create visual novels and story-based games, and for people who want to offer their services to create the same.
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#1 Post by silversporksama » Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:39 am

As said, lint check is not enough to guarantee the game's quality @_@
I'm 80% done with my script for Amarilyo (link in my sig) and am currently working on sprites, but...

When I tried out the game, I noticed quite a few spelling mistakes and places where I forgot to put a hard pause. I also know that my grammar isn't the best out there, so yeah...

I need someone who can edit my horrible writing into something that makes sense, fix my spelling errors, and recommend some things (Like where to put a short hard pause, removing a certain part of the game that seems irrelevant, adding a little something else...etc.)
I need someone trustworthy @A@ as this seems to be the first project of mine that would get released (/pats zero.one) and I don't want it to go badly.


Any kind souls out there....?
(And will I send a .zip/.rar of the game folder, or just the file with the game script for proofreading...?)
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Re: In need of a proof-reader/editor!

#2 Post by Wright1000 » Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:06 am

I sent you a pm.
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