Editor needed, pretty please [CLOSED]

[Dakishimete]

I'm looking for an editor, simply because english isn't my first language and criticism is always welcome, because I'm awful when it comes to checking my own work.
I'm already working with Riviera, but she's a busy person and two points of view are always better than one. I need someone to say which part is too short, too long, whenever are there any plot holes and pointing out my favourite mistake - writing the same thing twice in game because I forgot I've done it before.
Link to my project is located below.

Have a nice day
Dakishimete

[Dakishimete]

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