Looking for an editor

[TakeOverWorld]

Hi, I'm looking for an editor for a short VN I'm writing (and by short, at the moment it's very short, just under 2000 words, and the story is more or less finished.)
To summarize, it's basically about sadness. I was inspired by the quote 'If you want to be happy, be'
So I'm looking for an editor to tell me
-If it's any good (as in, if the writings atrocious or not) and how I might improve it
-If it's too short to convey the theme
-If it conveys the theme at all (and, importantly, if it makes sense at all)
-And spelling/grammar

Thanks for your time

[Applegate]

You can have my axe. I, personally, like stories with a theme and aim to write any of those. I do write short stories too, so I do not know if I am the most qualified person to say if it's too short.

[TakeOverWorld]

Thank you! Much appreciated.