Note : No need to give me tips about this forum. I am not new. I just have a second account so that my first will not be involved with eroge/hentai games.
Plot : You play a 19-year-old guy evicted from his apartment. When he asks for help from his mother, she tells him to go to his aunt. She them tells him a family secret : she owns a brothel!
Now he has to take it over!
Note : This is a DARK fetish game. It contains lots of evil characters (even though I try to make the Main Character a nice person)
OK, so for this game, I have some concept art and a blog, but I need help! Here is what I need help with :
[Writing] :
Yes, writing! You see, I have a big problem. I don't know how to balance the main character being good and evil for the intro. I will put the part where I get confused in a spoiler :
[This spoiler contains a fragement of an adult game script - PyTom]
$ cash -= 500
#her eyes close in relief
j "Oh yeah. This is a good one! I just got her today."
j "Before you go....Can I get a moment with her?"
menu :
"Yes." :
$ jacob_points += 5
j "Thanks. You are a really nice guy."
#jacob takes the girl into a room
mc_name "Hmm....I better take a look at what he is doing."
#looks into the room
#jacob is masterbating and cums on the girl's skirt
j "Mmm.....Ugh..."
#take her out of the room
j "OK. I hope you have fun with her!"
mc_name "Umm....Yeah...."
jump beginning_5
"No!" :
j "Aww....."
jump beginning_5
label beginning_5 :
mc_name "So.....What's your name."
stranger "I-It's %(b_girl_name)s..."
b_girl_name "Please....Please let me go! I don't wanna be forced in this!"
mc_name "I'm sorry! I didn't mean to do any of this! It just happened so fast!"
b_girl_name "Why did you buy me then!"
mc_name "I.....I was gonna take over a brothel but.....I can't do this!"
b_girl_name "Then let me go!"
mc_name "OK, I will-"
#suddenly jacob comes behind her and knocks her out.
j "That was close! You almost let her go."
mc_name "Why did you do that!?"
aunt "He did that because you were to weak to do it."
mc_name "Auntie, I can not do this. This industry and this guy is evil!"
j "Hey....I prefer to think of myself as 'EXTREMLY EVIL'."
j "Anyway, I will pack her into your car while you guys talk it out."
mc_name "How can you do this to people!?"
aunt "Look...I won't lie. This is an evil job...."
mc_name "I know!"
jump beginning_6
[Concept Art] :
Since these headshots will not always be so cheap, I need someone to do sketches of characters (hopefully fullbody). Even though all styles are accepted, I really like Durarara orCowboy Bebop style. So will be under 18+. Some 18+
Concepts :