I think that my story is good to make a visual novel,and is not like i never writed before,i have a few stories like this
Jade Calici is our main protagonist.She was abandoned by her parents.Their reason was that,with only 4 years old,she often speaked to invisible things,claiming that they where dead people or even demons.After 20 years she carries with a normal life as a writer inspired on the stories of ghosts that she can see.She became an obsesive writer,with the hope of making "The perfect book"
One day,she meets Daiji.A demon that goberns 3 legions,he is really close to her because they share a inferiority complex,through Jade don't likes to admit it.Soon,Daiji gets a interesting idea for one of her books,a idea that Jade will live as the main protagonist.Daiji convinces Jade to make a contract with him,he will make her live "The perfect book" and give her the chance of publishing it.The price? After getting her 5 minutes of fame,go to the hell,and make her his slave.
Soo? The main story will be focused on Jade,but there will be secondary stories on "The perfect book"
I don't want to make this post so long,so if any artist is interested comment below or send me a PM and then i will PM you back of my basic idea of the looks of characters,but always you can make little change.
Any style of drawing is okay for me (Realistic,semi-realistic,super duper moe) So i try giving the most open freedom to any artist interested
It's a quite long novel,i was thinking in one arc for every secondary story in "The perfection book" Making the arcs a total of 5.Don't worry,the VN won't be a huge 50+ hours novel.
Also,my english is really poor So i was thinking of a proofreader.Anyone wants to it's name appear in the credits page with a huge "PROOFREADER" ?
Yup,that's all i wanted to say
Something is wrong with the plot?
The characters are fine?
The format "A story inside another story" is too cliche?
Something else i should modify?
EDIT: Edited the title for less confusion
EDIT: I made a post in Works in progress! http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=26254