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Need a reader/idea bouncer

#1 Post by Morhighan » Thu Aug 28, 2014 11:30 pm

Greetings.

I am working on my project, AIdol again.

I've found myself at a wall with writing, partially due to depression but mostly because I've been away from the script for too long. Therefore I am looking for someone to go over my script and give me their thoughts. Once I start writing again (very soon) I want them to help me keep the same tone as I've been writing with, and bounce some ideas off of.

The plot is completed, as are the prologue and chapters 1-3. Rough character design is done and my artist has made two rough sketches based on my designs.

This is collaboration rather than commission, thank you for your understanding. I just need someone to help me get my writing tone straightened out and help me back on my feet.

Thanks for looking!

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#2 Post by Mistik » Fri Aug 29, 2014 12:53 am

How can someone help?

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#3 Post by Morhighan » Fri Aug 29, 2014 1:10 am

By going over my script and give me their thoughts. And once I start on the next part of writing, telling me if the old writing matches the new writing.

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#4 Post by Mistik » Fri Aug 29, 2014 1:37 am

I will go over it. It might take me till tomorrow to go over the whole thing. I'll give you honest feedback on plot, theme, character, and story progression. Suck at grammar though.

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#5 Post by Kuroonehalf » Fri Sep 05, 2014 1:52 pm

Hey, I can probably take a look at it too and do some proofreading work.

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#6 Post by ColaCat » Sat Sep 06, 2014 9:12 am

I'd be happy to be an ideabouncer for you if you'd like?
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#7 Post by RosyInk27 » Sat Sep 06, 2014 4:52 pm

If you're still looking for more people, I'm available to give some feedback.
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Re: Need a reader/idea bouncer

#8 Post by Nagato999 » Thu Oct 09, 2014 7:30 pm

Are you still looking for any help?

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