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Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:40 pm
by Zatch
A project that started. :D

Plot: Portia is a girl that run away from home at a young age and stays in her secret base with her friends Chase and Tyler. Portia's home was pretty peaceful with plants and animals in harmony and a lots of places to explore. One odd day, two traveling men appeared in the forest that was close to the base. She spotted them from top of a tree while looking for food for the night. Little did she know, that a mysterious man was lurking and waited to change the prophecy that have been told. Portia is about to learn about her destiny and will she able to over come it?

Portia: Portia is a 19 year old girl that live in secret base with her friends . She is pure and wise. Portia has unknown power of detecting spirits and lost souls. When Brad comes along with a quest, she will be in big shock. Portia is kind, sweet and beautiful. Portia is ambitious and eager for adventure.

Chase: One of Portia's friends that live with her. Chase is very good runner and but is lazy at times. He doesn't like to work very much and can get by doing the minimum. He is constantly being tease by Tyler with his trick. He wants to be a swordsman and be able to find a girlfriend too.

Tyler: Tyler is another friend of Portia. He is a trickster and a funny guy. He loves to tease Chase because it pretty easy to do it and plus it is fun for him. Tyler is pretty relax and take on the day easily.

more later.

features:
This is a normal visual novel with multiple endings.
It has things you can unlock.
Secret endings.

Progress:
Script: 5%
music 0%
art 0%

I need help the art. Please pm if you are interested on help. thank you :)

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:53 pm
by JinzouTamashii
Sounds good, good luck. Plot sounds really interesting and original so far.

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:54 pm
by Zatch
JinzouTamashii wrote:Sounds good, good luck. Plot sounds really interesting and original so far.
thanks Jinzou.

Here is some info about one of the villains.

Bruno Keys: The leader of the mysterious group called Rogues Covenant. He is an ex business man from New York City. He is fascinated by religious believes after a terrible accident by a car crash. He thought he saw a higher deity looking at him and transmitting a message to him. He sought to find out what it was and become bitter and wiser. After few weeks he starts to murder people and offer them to his idol for more power and wisdom. He convinces people to join in quest after murder or if they use to him.

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:18 am
by JinzouTamashii
*nod* Sounds like an excellent study of ... uh... what's it called again?

There we go.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_science_fiction

A lot of that is written by people who "progress" or "wander" through society, often feeling lost and looking for guidance. It can be very therapeutic and an excellent catharsis for any writer to dabble in. Ones off the top of my head: Dante's Inferno and The Aeneid.

Note that it's not "Social sci-fi" but "social science" fiction.

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:10 pm
by Lanna
I'm afraid I can't help you with the art, but I just wanted to say that the plot and the characters sound very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to this VN! :)

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:49 pm
by JinzouTamashii
I am also booked up, artwise, but maybe sometime in the future, heh.

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:00 am
by Zatch
Well I got a new artist Ra-nyan.

Well, I will research some stuff on social science fiction later.

I want to reveal the protagonist!

Randolph
An ex member of the D.I(Dark Inspectors) and leader of the secret branch of resistance. He is mostly a loner and doesn't let much people inside. He is loves adventure and battling. Randolph's best friends are Evan and Aaron. He is pretty fast and clever when in trouble.

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:04 am
by Asha
Mizu~u...

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:28 pm
by JinzouTamashii
This project is going to be great, huh?

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:15 pm
by ra-nyan
hopefully.. Not at all confident with my art yet but I'm trying different ways to make it better.. I'll probably drop by often in the CC thread..^^;;

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:33 pm
by Watercolorheart
I'm sure you'll do wonderfully.

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 10:55 pm
by Zatch
ra-nyan wrote:hopefully.. Not at all confident with my art yet but I'm trying different ways to make it better.. I'll probably drop by often in the CC thread..^^;;
You will do fine. :D Keep on trying to draw different ways to make it better. :D

Well, I got another update for you guys.

Well, writing is going fine. I would show you a sketch of Portia if it is okay with Ra-nyan,

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:35 pm
by ra-nyan
We still need help with the art here if anyone is still interested.. Even just a char. designer is fine.. ^^

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 7:55 pm
by Zatch
Another update!

Image
Concept art of Randolph.

There will be three love interest:
Portia
Elijah
Alexia

Re: Distance (Need Artist)

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:11 pm
by electric
That's nice character design