I got no traceback errors on my first play through, though I did find some grammatical errors and have some concerns.
In the start of the game, right before you decide to live on your own I got this sentence:
Frequent and bloody battles, and political-economic alliances that will crumble like stale biscuits.
This sentence seems unfinished somehow, like only a half formed sentence.
Small nitpick: Janime- First Encounter
To bad things didn't work out as planned. This place is packed and I have to work overtime.
I think I would change the word have to had and make her working overtime a past tense
Grammar Errors
Tailor Random Scenario:
You're having a somewhat dull day when a rich lady comes in, tosses her clothes carelessly at you, and order to have all her clothes cleaned before she returns. Aafter you return her clothes, you notice a pearl necklace and a pile of money on the floor.
There should be a 'you' after the word order in the first sentence and I think 'order' should have a 's' at the end too. The second sentence needs to take out an 'a' in the word 'After'
Random Encounter- Yuza in restaurant
Another frenetic workday in Yuza's restaurant
Should frenetic be frantic?
I don't get the sudden sickness thing, especially when my character has near perfect health.
Especially after I just got off of a two week vacation and she still suddenly gets sick? It makes no sense. I think the random sickness should occur more often when her health is low and only
rarely when her health is great, it just doesn't make sense any other way.
I hate that friend of hers who keeps getting married. She got married like ten times in my first play through and the trip takes way to much stats that I took months to build, which is hardly fair and it happens far to often in the game. It would be nice if you get as much benefits as they take away when they decrease your stats or at least be in better health and morale. It would also help if it happened less often too.
I have no luck whatsoever, which is fine because I'm blessed in real life, but with games like this where luck plays a role in how well I do on my job, it's not pretty. Luckily the computer had far better results than I did.
I still like the game so far, but it will take a lot longer to go through now that we got until the age of 30 to finish it. I don't like how you can either get married or have a career, but not both though. It's just seems unfair and remind of the past when women could either have a career or a husband, but never both.
I like Yuza's sad face, it's cute, but I wish they had a few more expressions though. The romances between some of the characters are really charming to me.
I personally think the taxing system is just daylight robbery, but this is a fantasy world so I guess it's just the cost of living.
