Love ♡ GET!! [WIP] [GxB] {Revived!}

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Re: ★ Project: Dating Sim [for girls]★ {Recruiting!}

#16 Post by Riviera » Sun Jun 27, 2010 2:04 pm

The art looks great.. I especially like the butterfly on his jacket :)
Will edit/proofread for cookies.

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#17 Post by sheetcakeghost » Sun Jun 27, 2010 2:15 pm

Well I've sent a prospective storyline to you in a PM as well as included my skype name. I LOVE working with groups in writing. Makes things so much easier. So long as everyone gets along anyway.

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#18 Post by sayuri » Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:37 pm

I'd like to help with writing but I'm currently busy with my own work. That being said, I always have time to proofread and critic. That probably won't be necessary for a while but I'm putting that out there.

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#19 Post by sheetcakeghost » Sun Jun 27, 2010 5:10 pm

Oh man, proofreaders are my knights in shining armor. I can't edit for beans. My brain overrides all the typos as I read. Even with other people's work.

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#20 Post by Hyda » Sun Jun 27, 2010 5:57 pm

Thank you everyone for the kind comments. I loved the butterfly on that characters jacket too. >w< It makes him stand out a little more hehe.

Having a future proofreader would definitely come in handy.

I will have to have a way for us all to contact each other. xD;; So I will be PMing everyone back and ask what form of communication we'd all like to use. :)

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#21 Post by Hyda » Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:21 pm

Added a hint at a storyline. Added a section for those that are helping~ Still have positions open. : D

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#22 Post by BlueRoseMaidenAras » Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:32 pm

Hehehe I wonder what personality the MC will have ^-^''
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#23 Post by Hyda » Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:33 pm

Yup~ still need to add an MC personality. I don't want to make her -too- "I'll help anyone in need and do good everywhere." xD I want her to have some strength and stubbornness about her. x3

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#24 Post by sheetcakeghost » Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:41 pm

It's probably best to keep her a little vague. That way the player can insert themselves as the MC.

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#25 Post by Hyda » Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:42 pm

Good idea. :O I wouldn't want to take that away from those playing. >w<

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#26 Post by Aleema » Sun Jun 27, 2010 7:54 pm

Hyda wrote:Good idea. :O I wouldn't want to take that away from those playing. >w<
Personally, I would hate it if she was vague to the point of no personality. Self-insertion stories are weak for a reason (see: the emotional impact of Bella Swan). >_>

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#27 Post by Hyda » Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:09 pm

That's true too xD I wanted to give her personality. ahh so many wants. xD I don't want her to be vague and boring @___@

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#28 Post by lepapillonrouge » Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:26 pm

Make her a badass.

Seriously, wouldn't it be cooler if we had a ass-kicking MC? XD I mean, she could be a humble one and not show her skills much, but yeah.
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#29 Post by Hyda » Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:29 pm

The badass types are pretty fun. xD I definitely don't want her to be walked all over. xD

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#30 Post by SugarlessGiiRL » Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:52 pm

she really should be badass!! these are the best :D and it's a good change from the silent MCs!!
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