What would you like to see in a sequel to Elven Relations?
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What would you like to see in a sequel to Elven Relations?
Hi, all! I've been idly musing for a while on the possibility of writing a sequel to Elven Relations. The world of that game grew far larger than the first game could show, and the characters are strong, so I think the potential is there. (SunKitten says she loves the idea of drawing characters for another game in the Elven Relations world too ^.^)
But I thought I'd like to see what people think. I won't promise to abide by the results here, but I will say that more votes/requests for something will make me more likely to write that
I'd be particularly interested in what you think of any of the following options: (Sorry that the poll is choose-only-one - please do comment if you feel strongly about any of these)
1a) A sequel with Takuya as the main character again (with the three girls from ER1 plus probably one new girl)
1b) A sequel with a different main character, but with appearances of the characters from ER1
2a) A stronger "common" plot
2b) A focus on the individual stories of the girls
3a) Political intrigue playing a greater part in the plot
3b) Magic playing a greater part in the plot
4a) A focus on the elves
4b) A focus on the human kingdom (including the Royal Academy of Magic)
4c) A focus on the merpeople
4d) A focus on the other races or kingdoms (dwarves, trolls, the Hassan humans, others)
5) Anything else you'd particularly like to see
So, if you have an opinion, write or vote away. Thanks in advance!
But I thought I'd like to see what people think. I won't promise to abide by the results here, but I will say that more votes/requests for something will make me more likely to write that
I'd be particularly interested in what you think of any of the following options: (Sorry that the poll is choose-only-one - please do comment if you feel strongly about any of these)
1a) A sequel with Takuya as the main character again (with the three girls from ER1 plus probably one new girl)
1b) A sequel with a different main character, but with appearances of the characters from ER1
2a) A stronger "common" plot
2b) A focus on the individual stories of the girls
3a) Political intrigue playing a greater part in the plot
3b) Magic playing a greater part in the plot
4a) A focus on the elves
4b) A focus on the human kingdom (including the Royal Academy of Magic)
4c) A focus on the merpeople
4d) A focus on the other races or kingdoms (dwarves, trolls, the Hassan humans, others)
5) Anything else you'd particularly like to see
So, if you have an opinion, write or vote away. Thanks in advance!
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Wouldn't mind 1A, but I wouldn't want to be in your shoes... either you clear everything, or you have each couple break up for some reason with the possibility to patch up or go for another girl ^^;...
Hence... I'd choose 1B. It'll feel fresh, gives you more freedom, and lets you put many cameos
2A/2B... I really don't know. I liked how ER was. I would only *add* to it, not change it.
3A/3B... Mmm... None? It's really the characterization that makes ER nice, not some overly dramatic situation (I know many people wanted more but... then you'll please them and not those who liked it as it was, ne? ;p)
4ABCD : All of them ... There's just so much to discover anyway ... But ok, maybe the merpeople/dwarves/Hassans would be nice since we only *heard* about them.
5)... Mmmmmmm... Keep the fighting as it is with the dual option, if possible. If not, the narrated fighting is the best in the long run ^^ (though more variety and describing of the fights wouldn't hurt... ala Radical Dreamers).
I wouldn't mind a more branching game ala Heart de Roommate : once you've earned enough points, you get on a "second part" focusing on the girl. But it's not over yet! You still have to get it right or only get a good ending. And of course, the other characters turn into supporting charas. (but this branching would be a lot more work so... do it the ER1 way if it's too big ^^)
Hence... I'd choose 1B. It'll feel fresh, gives you more freedom, and lets you put many cameos
2A/2B... I really don't know. I liked how ER was. I would only *add* to it, not change it.
3A/3B... Mmm... None? It's really the characterization that makes ER nice, not some overly dramatic situation (I know many people wanted more but... then you'll please them and not those who liked it as it was, ne? ;p)
4ABCD : All of them ... There's just so much to discover anyway ... But ok, maybe the merpeople/dwarves/Hassans would be nice since we only *heard* about them.
5)... Mmmmmmm... Keep the fighting as it is with the dual option, if possible. If not, the narrated fighting is the best in the long run ^^ (though more variety and describing of the fights wouldn't hurt... ala Radical Dreamers).
I wouldn't mind a more branching game ala Heart de Roommate : once you've earned enough points, you get on a "second part" focusing on the girl. But it's not over yet! You still have to get it right or only get a good ending. And of course, the other characters turn into supporting charas. (but this branching would be a lot more work so... do it the ER1 way if it's too big ^^)
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Without voting in the poll above (since a poll is a poor substitute for reasoned discussion), I say:
1b - I think that if you use the same characters, then to some extent the decisions made in ER matter less. Takuya ended up with someone (or noone) at the end of ER, and you wouldn't want a new game to change that.
An alternative would be a series of short stories that are out of continuity with each other.
2b) I like it when each girl gets her own story. They can interrelate, but I prefer games where each girl has a well-defined story of her own, with a beginning, middle, and end, rather than having a main story and then an ending for each girl.
No opinion on the rest of the issues.
1b - I think that if you use the same characters, then to some extent the decisions made in ER matter less. Takuya ended up with someone (or noone) at the end of ER, and you wouldn't want a new game to change that.
An alternative would be a series of short stories that are out of continuity with each other.
2b) I like it when each girl gets her own story. They can interrelate, but I prefer games where each girl has a well-defined story of her own, with a beginning, middle, and end, rather than having a main story and then an ending for each girl.
No opinion on the rest of the issues.
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I'd vote "no sequel".
Thousands of reasons - but most of all, because sequels rarely feel fresh. They may be better, more in-depth, but all these "improvements" (if the sequel is indeed at least as good as the original) lack the atmosphere of something really new.
Sure there are countless positives to sequels, but well, you wanted an opinion - mine is "don't do it". ER was great (maybe even because there was so much to think about afterwards), but so was WIRTW. Two games, two original works that feel special. And if given the choice, I'd like the third game to show me yet another world or experience. A new book, instead of a new chapter. Because while ER may have been open, it wasn't unfinished.
Thousands of reasons - but most of all, because sequels rarely feel fresh. They may be better, more in-depth, but all these "improvements" (if the sequel is indeed at least as good as the original) lack the atmosphere of something really new.
Sure there are countless positives to sequels, but well, you wanted an opinion - mine is "don't do it". ER was great (maybe even because there was so much to think about afterwards), but so was WIRTW. Two games, two original works that feel special. And if given the choice, I'd like the third game to show me yet another world or experience. A new book, instead of a new chapter. Because while ER may have been open, it wasn't unfinished.
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1a ^_^ Harder to implement I know, but possible (If you've played/ have the translated scripts of the Sakura Taisen games, then those are examples of how to take a 'steady' relationship and still have relationship choices in subsequent games.). Either that or use as a starting point a game wherein Takuya didn't end up with a rock solid relationship with any of the girls - certainly possible. I got that the first few times
2a. From my limited VN knowledge, actual love triangles/polygons aren't often played out in the games. Once you choose to pursue one character, the others dont seem to treat you as a potential romantic interest anymore, I think that the push-and-pull of the love triangle can be a great source of drama and humor, and that would mean the plot couldnt focus too much on one girl, until the very end.
3a. Magic is interesting of course - but politics, ah, that can rend hearts and sunder souls
4a. I think if we're using the same characters here, the elves would need to still play a major role - the new relations were just beginning at the end of ER, so it would be hasty to bring another faction into it - EXCEPT as an antagonist.
5 - Well, I already mentioned this above I think, but subtle and not-so-subtle conflict between the girls would be cool to see. With the player stuck in the middle of course ^_^
2a. From my limited VN knowledge, actual love triangles/polygons aren't often played out in the games. Once you choose to pursue one character, the others dont seem to treat you as a potential romantic interest anymore, I think that the push-and-pull of the love triangle can be a great source of drama and humor, and that would mean the plot couldnt focus too much on one girl, until the very end.
3a. Magic is interesting of course - but politics, ah, that can rend hearts and sunder souls
4a. I think if we're using the same characters here, the elves would need to still play a major role - the new relations were just beginning at the end of ER, so it would be hasty to bring another faction into it - EXCEPT as an antagonist.
5 - Well, I already mentioned this above I think, but subtle and not-so-subtle conflict between the girls would be cool to see. With the player stuck in the middle of course ^_^
I think if there were a sequel, I'd like to see a different character in the same world, perhaps featuring some of the same characters.
(y'know, like, what if I'm a Takuya/Tohko fan, and the sequel insists that ending #1 is the "true" ending-- or else you'd have to write something that could be played 3 different ways based on the 3 "best" endings)
(y'know, like, what if I'm a Takuya/Tohko fan, and the sequel insists that ending #1 is the "true" ending-- or else you'd have to write something that could be played 3 different ways based on the 3 "best" endings)
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Hmm, if anything, I will take:
1a) Well, what is a sequel without the former group.
2b) While group adventure is good, but I think most want to know more about their favourite girl.
3a-b) Now I am rather biased on this one. Since Takuya excels at neither, I guess you have to mix in the bunch.
4c-d) Try a fourth girl - Princess of the Mer.
5) It is poorly cliched, but I have to say it.... DRAGON! (Then again, a dragonkin(human dragon) with glasses might just suit me perfectly. )
1a) Well, what is a sequel without the former group.
2b) While group adventure is good, but I think most want to know more about their favourite girl.
3a-b) Now I am rather biased on this one. Since Takuya excels at neither, I guess you have to mix in the bunch.
4c-d) Try a fourth girl - Princess of the Mer.
5) It is poorly cliched, but I have to say it.... DRAGON! (Then again, a dragonkin(human dragon) with glasses might just suit me perfectly. )
monele >> ugh, you almost got me there, but I have cautiously worded it "a new world or experience". ^_^
But yes, depending on how extensive your interpretation of the options is, ER2 can be completely different from the original - and I'd prefer that. Very subtle references, not too many fanservicy cameos, and I'm in.
But yes, depending on how extensive your interpretation of the options is, ER2 can be completely different from the original - and I'd prefer that. Very subtle references, not too many fanservicy cameos, and I'm in.
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Maybe have the Yurika ending but...
Just having the gang as freinds instead?
Just having the gang as freinds instead?
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What I'd Like To See
New character as PC , same world, a few "old" characters show up at some point....and a major focus on other races/a different race....Hmm...a focus on merpeople or a catlike race or a different elf race.
It'd be nice to be able to choose to play as a male or female character in the ER world.
Any game.
Oh, yeah, if you focus on a non-elf race then it would be kind of odd to have it as the sequel , eh? So...pick a new/different elf race and have that be Elven Relations 2?
Just a thought. *shrug*
It'd be nice to be able to choose to play as a male or female character in the ER world.
Any game.
Oh, yeah, if you focus on a non-elf race then it would be kind of odd to have it as the sequel , eh? So...pick a new/different elf race and have that be Elven Relations 2?
Just a thought. *shrug*
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