I feel as I am writing my story, that I may be overusing the tag. It seems natural to me to use the {w} tag anywhere there is a natural pause in conversation.
Here is an example passage of how I have been using it:
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"You return to the flower seller's wagon, thankfully it doesn't look like she is busy at the moment. {w}Her flowers seemed to be the favorite of the market today, as she had sold through most of what she had brought."
plr "Excuse me, I have noticed how well your flowers have been selling today. {w}I saw them on display when I got to the market today, and it was quite the display of colors. {w}Would you possibly consider buying any flowers? I have some I cut from my garden this morning."
"She considers your request for a moment."
flrSeller "Normally I wouldn't have any need to buy flowers, but at the rate I am going today it wouldn't hurt to buy a few extra. {w}Can I take a look at them?"
"You take the bundle of roses from your basket and allow her to look at them."
flrSeller "Wow, these are quite beautiful. Not any wild rose. {w}You grew them yourself?"
"You nod"
flrSeller "These are very good quality, I shouldn't have any trouble selling them."
"Setting the bundle of roses down for a moment, she counted out a handful of coins."
flrSeller "Will this be enough?"
plr "Yes, thank you very much. {w}I just need a little extra to buy some essentials today."
"She hands you the coins and you put them away in your purse."