Your style of art is really good, I mean, there is no unnecessary idealization, but as there is no carelessness, and it makes the picture a kind of unique.
I'm no expert in these matters, I'm just saying what I see and what I feel, nothing more.
And the plot ... The plot is not bad, not brilliant of course, but not bad. (Judging by the demo, of course)
In defense, I can say that your plot - way better than most of the "GXG" VN\Games.
About the characters, I really love the Lyria, in many reasons - But the most I love in her, it's her passion.
But Melody, she kinda weak I guess(In demo), maybe it's because she a "girl-next-door" type of character, I mean she is very predictable, but maybe she surprise us in full version?...
In anyways, I looking forward full game release.
Nobody is perfect, but why not try and approach to the ideal as closely as possible - it's my conclusion, about this game.
...Of course, this game for the people who like the "GXG", which there is not so many.
But hey - You do a great job, so - keep it up!
And sorry for my bad EnGriSh.

