Break Chance Memento [RELEASED]
Forum rules
Please read the sticky before creating a new topic. Linking to Kickstarter/Crowdfunded games requires a demo. Updates to Patreon-backed games may be posted once every 2 months. Adult content should not be posted in this forum.
Please read the sticky before creating a new topic. Linking to Kickstarter/Crowdfunded games requires a demo. Updates to Patreon-backed games may be posted once every 2 months. Adult content should not be posted in this forum.
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
Wooow, I love the revamped version! I mean, the first was good too, but redoing it was well worth it. Good job!
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
I think so too It's very worth going over them one last time because I like the new versions a lot more.Veniae wrote:Wooow, I love the revamped version! I mean, the first was good too, but redoing it was well worth it. Good job!
Here is another improvement sprite. The three things I think I have improved on the most are the shading (especially in terms of speed), the placement of facial features (I had been putting the nose far too low and it threw off everything else) and figuring out how the hell the legs attach to the torso. I think i have gotten MUCH better at legs.
I have 3 secondary sprites left, so I should be finished sometime next weekend, which is way ahead of the schedule I have so I should be able to spend a great deal of time fixing up the main five. This means I might actually be able to give them some of the extra outfits I thought I wouldn't have time for, and maybe even an extra pose ^_^
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
Another family member done. I didn't really have to change too much for this one, the biggest thing was adding in the minor pose. The rest was a couple updates. I've also started to learn to, ah, optimise assets where I can, which can help a lot. Might do it for Papa too. Kyousuke is up next
- Obscura
- Eileen-Class Veteran
- Posts: 1431
- Joined: Fri Mar 09, 2012 6:58 pm
- Projects: Coming Out On Top
- Location: United States
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
I really dig your sprites Auro...they're super distinctive. At first they look anime but after a moment they carry this quality that makes them different than any style I've seen before.
One thing I'd like to see is some of their noses being pushed in a more just to give more variety in their faces. Right now they all seem to have the same proportions on the nose: long and lean and above all, low. Would love to see button noses, flatter noses, hooked noses, etc., somewhat closer to the face. Even just placing them differently would add some variety. I think that's the one thing I would like to see different in your sprites.
Otherwise, love the illustration quality of your line work. Envy your skills!
One thing I'd like to see is some of their noses being pushed in a more just to give more variety in their faces. Right now they all seem to have the same proportions on the nose: long and lean and above all, low. Would love to see button noses, flatter noses, hooked noses, etc., somewhat closer to the face. Even just placing them differently would add some variety. I think that's the one thing I would like to see different in your sprites.
Otherwise, love the illustration quality of your line work. Envy your skills!
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
True, true. I would like to explore more diversity with my art, and I think I'm slowly starting to get there. I tend to fall into the trap of drawing what I find attractive rather than stepping out of my comfort zone and see what else I could draw. I think there is more to it than just noses, but they are a part of it for sure XD But thank you, it makes me happy that you like my style ^_^Obscura wrote:I really dig your sprites Auro...they're super distinctive. At first they look anime but after a moment they carry this quality that makes them different than any style I've seen before.
One thing I'd like to see is some of their noses being pushed in a more just to give more variety in their faces. Right now they all seem to have the same proportions on the nose: long and lean and above all, low. Would love to see button noses, flatter noses, hooked noses, etc., somewhat closer to the face. Even just placing them differently would add some variety. I think that's the one thing I would like to see different in your sprites.
Otherwise, love the illustration quality of your line work. Envy your skills!
I still have a couple bits and pieces to do for the secondary sprites, but I have started working on the main characters as well, which has already been fun. It's good to be able to draw some new outfits~
We also technically now have a grand total of 1 CG XD
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
This is Fuyuka. I hadn't really designed her since, well, she's dead, but I kind of had a visual idea of her so I decided to do a quick warm up sketch to get her out of my head. Plus, I was testing out some shading stuff that I have been trying to nut out. Made me a little sad though. She looks like she would have been a happy kid
Edit: Oh god, now I'm listening to this! Am I trying to break my own heart?
Edit: Oh god, now I'm listening to this! Am I trying to break my own heart?
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
A fixed Yukinari, who is done for now. He won't be getting any more outfits until I see how I go with the rest. I'm pretty sure I'm going to overshoot my deadline by a bit, which should be okay. Can't do it too much though because the more time I spend on the sprites, the less CGs I can make. However, since the player spends most of the game staring at the sprites, I think it is worth a little bit of sacrifice to have them look okay.
- Nische
- Regular
- Posts: 131
- Joined: Wed May 23, 2012 2:46 am
- Projects: Love at the Laundromat
- Organization: Moustachio Studios
- Location: Philippines
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
I'd like to chip in with everyone else when they say that the redrawn sprites are looking much better. I like how you've multiplied a texture on top of the drawing, it really does give it that extra 'umph'. *A*
I wish I had more time to try the demo... the game is looking so good right now. I especially love the GUI.
Great job with Fuyuka! She looks absolutely adorable. :'D
I wish I had more time to try the demo... the game is looking so good right now. I especially love the GUI.
Great job with Fuyuka! She looks absolutely adorable. :'D
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
Ah, revising sprites, good times no? Thank you, I am much more satisfied with them now at least, though it's always hard to resist that urge to 'add one more thing' XD And I'm really glad I add the texture, I love putting textures on things~Nische wrote:I'd like to chip in with everyone else when they say that the redrawn sprites are looking much better. I like how you've multiplied a texture on top of the drawing, it really does give it that extra 'umph'. *A*
I wish I had more time to try the demo... the game is looking so good right now. I especially love the GUI.
Great job with Fuyuka! She looks absolutely adorable. :'D
- eileen
- Veteran
- Posts: 211
- Joined: Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:59 pm
- Projects: Akiba Z and Passion Sync
- Organization: Aphrodisia/Beautiful Starr
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
Holy cow! Look at this stuff! I can tell that you guys have been working on this really hard. I really like the backgrounds as they are amazing in itself. Man, I wish I could do backgrounds like that D:
I know, way too late like 8 months in and stuff but I try to your demo and love the concept of time traveling. I would say this is on my to get for sure. Keep up the good work!
I know, way too late like 8 months in and stuff but I try to your demo and love the concept of time traveling. I would say this is on my to get for sure. Keep up the good work!
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
@Eileen, Thank you, I'm very happy you enjoyed the demo Time travelling is a lot of fun to deal with, even if it does make things really confusing XD
I finished updating Chiaki last night, for now. I would really like to give him a super adoreable alternative hairstyle, but that can wait. Masa is up next. Boy he needs some work o.o
I finished updating Chiaki last night, for now. I would really like to give him a super adoreable alternative hairstyle, but that can wait. Masa is up next. Boy he needs some work o.o
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
Oh. My. God.
This is the last time I leave a year in between doing sprites and finishing them off. I pretty much redrew everything for Masa, and no doubt Shuuki and Natsume will be the same. Whooooo...
This is the last time I leave a year in between doing sprites and finishing them off. I pretty much redrew everything for Masa, and no doubt Shuuki and Natsume will be the same. Whooooo...
- NoJoker
- Regular
- Posts: 145
- Joined: Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:52 pm
- Completed: Sleepless Night series, Soulmates, TIWIWTD, TKABS
- Projects: Legend of the Silver Fox, Sleepless Night 3
- Deviantart: Massimow
- itch: massimow
- Location: Germany
- Discord: Massimo#3596
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
I never would have guessed that it's possible, but he looks even better now! Congratulations!
- clua
- Miko-Class Veteran
- Posts: 537
- Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2009 1:38 pm
- Completed: Stormy Night /The Knife of the Traitor/Charlatans
- Projects: The Hurtful Wall /_Salomon/Infurubia
- Tumblr: notttt-che
- itch: chegovia
- Location: In a jar with pirañas
- Contact:
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
Hey Auro I just wanted to say that I really love how you are drawing hands(specially the guys)
woops pressed submit early.
Also I can see the difference between the newer sprites, not only they are better drawn, I can see a color improvement there.
Great work, really admirable.
woops pressed submit early.
Also I can see the difference between the newer sprites, not only they are better drawn, I can see a color improvement there.
Great work, really admirable.
♦WIP♦
Infurubia
The hurtful wall
_Salomon
♦COMPLETE♦
+The Knife of the Traitor(Nanoreno 2012)
+Charlatans(Nanoreno 2015)
♦Dev tumblr♦
♦EVN Store♦
Infurubia
The hurtful wall
_Salomon
♦COMPLETE♦
+The Knife of the Traitor(Nanoreno 2012)
+Charlatans(Nanoreno 2015)
♦Dev tumblr♦
♦EVN Store♦
Re: Break Chance Memento [BxB] [Sci-Fi Murder Mystery]
Oooh, I approve! Everyone looks better than before, and that is saying something!
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: Amazon [Bot]