Current Progress Photo: 39 Pages
This VN is being made using scanned hand-drawn pictures, using pencils, a black liner and colored pencils plus some other drawing tools.
(Currently, I have 65 pages.)
Lilli has spent most of her life completely blind, deaf... simply lacking all of the senses(including the non-traditional ones), and kept alive by the gemstone she lives in (Zoisite). Not only that, she also lives in an universe composed of long hexagon-shaped rods that together make masses of land. Just as she first awakens the sense of vision and the basic space-time senses, she is able to see the world for herself. On her way, she awakens more senses such as hearing(one of the five senses) or pain(non-traditional sense). She feels bored in this world because of being in a clear stone that not only works as an effective prison, but also resists magic! It's a mysterious stone of darkness that may even hurt the one inside if not careful.
Lilli doesn't know that even her physical actions are, in fact, magical, so the stone hurts her quite often. The stone also reacts to her emotions, this can even lead to positive results, meaning that the Zoisite can also help her.
As the story develops in the second chapter, she befriends three spirits - of the elements: Light, Water and Earth. These three spirits will grow older and accompany Lilli in the future.
He's the one riding a wolf. He is a calm and kind-hearted character.
The one with the naginata.
Lilli's spirit of water. She is the one wearing the blue cloak. Likes to toy with others but respects her friends.
He's the one who jumps down with the axe. He won't appear until very late of the game. An antagonist.
The mage with the green staff. He won't appear until very late of the game. An antagonist.
One of my old characters!!(dA link) She, too, however, won't appear until very late of the game.She's a very major antagonist.
Here are some pages from the game. I tried to pick some of the best or most emotional ones (but spoiler-free) out of the bunch:
Here is a little screenshot as an example, I replaced the old one.
So, let me know if you like the project so far.
1)Does this VN look good so far for my first try?
2)Do you think there should be more characters? (I am planning more, but I am not intending to make my story character heavy, except for an army as hinted in the poster.)
3)Is the simple artwork satisfactory?
4)Is it okay for you that this novel will most likely be mostly kinetic? (Assuming that the answers you give to Future Lilli might do some changes) (This VN won't be kinetic after all, feel free to skip this question.)
5)Is the story confusing you? I tried to exclude as many spoilers as I could ><
6)Would you like to see a short demo?
7)Are there any things you are loking forward to?