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Re: [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG] Bliss Stage LIYW - NEW! Demo

#31 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

Just a heads up: we're going to be rolling out another version of the demo shortly, based on people's earliest bug reports and suggestions.
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#32 Post by tiya_nofurita »

Seems interesting and complicated :o
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#33 Post by vilkacis »

Found more stuff.

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"Peices" of work. Also I saw you using italics later on, so I'd recommend doing that instead of CAPS whenever possible.

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Don't need the second ...

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Extra S in "he'ss"

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Probably meant to be, "if you call on everyone..."

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I really don't recommend using ~. You have narration already; you can use that to describe the tone if necessary.

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#34 Post by Taleweaver »

vilkacis wrote:Found more stuff.
I really think OP would want this sort of information in a PM and not in the thread.
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#36 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

Taleweaver wrote:
vilkacis wrote:Found more stuff.
I really think OP would want this sort of information in a PM and not in the thread.
That would probably be for the best in the future. I asked people to post that stuff to this thread when they were split into fan and developer threads, but under the one-thread-per-work system in place now it would probably be better as a PM.
Also a good place for bug and typo reports.
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Re: [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG] Bliss Stage LIYW - NEW! Demo

#37 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

So, you have attack animations to look forward to in the next public update.

We're going to test the new animation and content thoroughly before we do another public update, but enjoy the teaser.
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#38 Post by Starshine »

Tsundere Lightning wrote:So, you have attack animations to look forward to in the next public update.

We're going to test the new animation and content thoroughly before we do another public update, but enjoy the teaser.
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#39 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

Please allow me to apologize for the long hiatus. Unfortunately, our website is temporarily down: in the meantime, please direct questions to the official tumblr (blissstagevn.tumblr.com).

We're still working very hard on Bliss Stage LIYW, and adding the option to play from the POV of Sara Smith.

We expect to have a much more extensive demo, about a fourth to a third of the game, done by the end of the year; hopefully we'll also have a first draft of the entire game for the KS backers.
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#40 Post by silverpikachu99 »

Wow this looks so cool!!
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#41 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

We are pleased to announce that Unwoman, AKA Erica Mulkey, will be contributing her musical talents to the BSVN and will be voicing Anna Lin.

Full details at the tumblr.
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#42 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

On the first weekend of November, some of the BSVN team will be making an appearance at Con-Volution 2013, in Burlingame, California - near SFO BART. I'll personally be running a tabletop Bliss Stage campaign, and a couple other games in FATE Core based on unannounced Ren'Py projects. Look for us in Open Gaming!

I've also edited the character bios. Take another look.
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#43 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

A brief update with Luiz's character bio added to the master character bios on the first page.

We're working out the voice-acting situation. The good news is that we're definitely going to have VA's, and a lot of care put into it. The bad news is that we're not going to start recording the game script until January of next year, so the December demo will not have voice acting.

However, we'll be putting up samples sometime in November for your listening pleasure!
She's sun and rain: She's fire and ice. A little crazy, but it's nice.
Bliss Stage: Love is your weapon! A sci-fi visual novel about child soldiers coming of age. Kickstarter prerelease here. WIP thread here. Original tabletop game by Ben Lehman here. Tumblr here.

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