System of Paradise [Mystery] [Romance] [Action]

[Incognito]

What do you guys think Samael?

[Arelune]

He seems like a fun character.
That confident smile. That slightly flamboyant pose. Those earrings. Heh. :3

[Incognito]

He seems like a fun character.
That confident smile. That slightly flamboyant pose. Those earrings. Heh. :3

Thanks for commenting again!

Do you have a VN of your own, or a thread on this site i can comment on?

[Arowana]

My favorite character design so far. He's really stylin.' xD

It's really pro that you do full body drawings for your sprites. Are you going to use full body poses in the game, or just thigh-up?

[Incognito]

My favorite character design so far. He's really stylin.' xD

It's really pro that you do full body drawings for your sprites. Are you going to use full body poses in the game, or just thigh-up?

I'm thinking of having zoomed in and out shots in the game, drawing the characters full body will help this.

Thanks for the input again!

[Arelune]

Do you have a VN of your own, or a thread on this site i can comment on?

Not yet. I'm not planning on making one before I have it at least way over half completed. And I can be a rather slow worker, so don't expect it any time soon. I appreciate the thought though. :)

Do you already have ideas for the GUI?

[Incognito]

Do you have a VN of your own, or a thread on this site i can comment on?

Not yet. I'm not planning on making one before I have it at least way over half completed. And I can be a rather slow worker, so don't expect it any time soon. I appreciate the thought though.

Do you already have ideas for the GUI?

I see

Well as of right now the GUI is still in early development so i don't have much to show.

Here are some actions pieces that will be shown in the VN.

[Incognito]

Introducing the first female character of System of Paradise, Princess Belial. This is my interpretation of the chief of demons Belial as known in Demonology.



What do you guys think?

[Boomsickle]

The pants look a little too big on those other characters the bg looks okay but im sure its still being worked on and the calf's for this girl seem a little too big and i cant figure out where the source of your lighting is coming from. But what do i know i cant draw to save my life. All in all its coming together so good job!

[Incognito]

The pants look a little too big on those other characters the bg looks okay but im sure its still being worked on and the calf's for this girl seem a little too big and i cant figure out where the source of your lighting is coming from. But what do i know i cant draw to save my life. All in all its coming together so good job!

Thanks for your comment, i agree the calf's seem a bit long.

Here is Astaroth

[Incognito]

The queen of the Netherworld Azazel, also this stories main villain.

[Incognito]

The lazy demon Abaddon

What do you guys think?

[Incognito]

Our team has opened up a Group on Deviant Art.

It would be awesome to get some support from you guys here on Lemma Soft.

http://team-chimera.deviantart.com/

[cuttlefish]

I like the art and character descriptions so far. If the descriptions are any indication of what the story is, it sounds very interesting. I don't really know what happens in Paradise Lost besides what the Wikipedia page says. Do you think the plot could be summed up in 3 sentences? Nonetheless, I'd read this KN once it's finished!

Also, not that I dislike skin or the art isn't good, but is there a reason for most of the female characters to have the outfits they have? Is it because they're demons or of the Netherworld? It just seems stereotypical, although you are free to interpret them as you wish.

[Incognito]

I like the art and character descriptions so far. If the descriptions are any indication of what the story is, it sounds very interesting. I don't really know what happens in Paradise Lost besides what the Wikipedia page says. Do you think the plot could be summed up in 3 sentences? Nonetheless, I'd read this KN once it's finished!

Also, not that I dislike skin or the art isn't good, but is there a reason for most of the female characters to have the outfits they have? Is it because they're demons or of the Netherworld? It just seems stereotypical, although you are free to interpret them as you wish.

Hm the plot in three sentences, let me give it a try but i can't give too much away.

System of Paradise is about Lucifer's fall from grace, that part of the story is told in his perspective. The secondary element to the plot takes place in Gabriel's perspective, His story is about investigating the Netherworld. With two perspectives you will find out the secrets that God has kept from the angels this is the mystery aspect of the plot.

The females wear similar outfits because they come from the Netherworld, the outfits usually contain black leather.

Thank you so much for your comment, i hope you keep track of further development.