Amy's Super Life! [GxB][School life][Supernatural][Tragedy]

[Michiyo6918]

Finally was able to see the new sprite...

My first impression was Amy's mother is so cute! But then... is she a little too young to be a mother? She looks more like Amy's friend

But anyway, keep up the good work!

[briannavon]

Finally was able to see the new sprite...

My first impression was Amy's mother is so cute! But then... is she a little too young to be a mother? She looks more like Amy's friend

But anyway, keep up the good work!

Well, Adela (Amy's mom) got married young, so that's why she looks so young. (Note: She is 35)

[FatUnicornGames]

Can I just chime in and say, I've been lurking this thread a bit, and I am AMAZED at how much better the sprite art has gotten in the last month or so. Great work! Keep it up.

[miaverana]

Thank you! I'll do my best!

[Egressus]

Playing the second demo, I'd like to note the affection points that pops up during interaction with Justin.
I think it'll be better to show them with bars, if you chose to show them at all? I know how hard it is to start a screen from scratch, but I believe it'll be much nicer.
(BTW we sure have lots of J guys)

Justin is a bit stretched out. Also, in dark scenes, some of the text blend with the red edges.

That being said, the art improved a lot. The plot advanced far more than the first demo, too, and it's definitely better because I'm not lost and second guessing. I also like the latter Amy's voice, which has more personality.
You definitely improved over a short time span!

[briannavon]

Playing the second demo, I'd like to note the affection points that pops up during interaction with Justin.
I think it'll be better to show them with bars, if you chose to show them at all? I know how hard it is to start a screen from scratch, but I believe it'll be much nicer.
(BTW we sure have lots of J guys)

Justin is a bit stretched out. Also, in dark scenes, some of the text blend with the red edges.

That being said, the art improved a lot. The plot advanced far more than the first demo, too, and it's definitely better because I'm not lost and second guessing. I also like the latter Amy's voice, which has more personality.
You definitely improved over a short time span!

Thank you for the compliments to our game! Just about all of the bad stuff is my fault. But a lot of the good is thanks to mia!

[Egressus]

Oh, but nothing good would come out without both of you collaborating, no?
Without your story, Mia wouldn't be illustrating. It's team work, you see.
(Unless you're doing things alone. Actually, that leaves little room for drastic improvement, because you're doing everything and you want it to be done with omggg.)

Anyway, are you going to release another series of demo, or wait until everything's done?

[briannavon]

Oh, but nothing good would come out without both of you collaborating, no?
Without your story, Mia wouldn't be illustrating. It's team work, you see.
(Unless you're doing things alone. Actually, that leaves little room for drastic improvement, because you're doing everything and you want it to be done with omggg.)

Anyway, are you going to release another series of demo, or wait until everything's done?

By another series of demo, do you mean another of our game's demo? Because we are waiting for Amy's Super Life to be done before I start coding the other games (unless mia,Bianca , or Yuki want me to start coding on the other games right now. If they want me to, then I will start coding the other games right now so I can release their demos soon).

[Egressus]

The game's. You know, how some people like to have exactly three demo, or those who plans only one before releasing again only when it's done.

[miaverana]

Oh, but nothing good would come out without both of you collaborating, no?
Without your story, Mia wouldn't be illustrating. It's team work, you see.
(Unless you're doing things alone. Actually, that leaves little room for drastic improvement, because you're doing everything and you want it to be done with omggg.)

Anyway, are you going to release another series of demo, or wait until everything's done?

As you see, we're remaking all of the characters, so we'll release another, and also the last demo with full characters, more details in the story and fixed problems ^w^.

[Egressus]

Oh right, I noticed how in your blog, you used "Mia's here" to tell who's writing.
If you have a theme that shows avatar, it'll be much easier to show who's who if you have two separate Wordpress accounts.

I see!

[miaverana]

A sketch of a boy, I didn't draw him, Bianca did ^w^.

[miaverana]

Another rough sketch from Bianca.

[briannavon]

Update: More info on WIP main post!

[cookiestruck]

I'm stalking this discussion from now on~ :p