Hello! This is my first try at a Ren'py game, so I welcome any and all advice/criticism. I actually have an idea for a more complex one, but I wanted to try something simple while I learn the coding, process, etc. So this will probably be pretty short as well. (also let me know if there's more I should be putting in this post!)
Temporary title: One summer night
Summary: Life as a teenager isn't always just passing notes in the hall and chasing after crushes. Simon and Samantha have been drawing strength from one another as best friends for the last 3 years, but will they ever be more than that?
--> I'm actually just modifying a short story I wrote a long time ago.
Endings: 3 (perfect, good, bad)
Characters:
Samantha:
Age:17
Height: 5'4"
Simon:
no image yet
Age: 17
Height: 6'0"
Some background images:
bridge
houses
swing set
I have limited artistic ability so I just edited public domain pictures in photoshop. Any thoughts on how they look would be appreciated.
Also, the picture of the girl is the first thing I've ever really colored on the comp so feedback on that would be nice too! (I know I need to redo the eyes)
One Summer Night... [BxG][Romance]
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Re: One Summer Night... [BxG][Romance]
I won't offer criticism, but I will offer encouragement. I hope you have fun making your VN, and that any criticism you get is constructive and includes suggestions for improving your work.
Some of my visual novels are at http://www.the-new-lagoon.com. They are NSFW
Poorly done hand-drawn art is still poorly done art. Be a Poser (or better yet, use DAZ Studio 3D) - dare to be different.
Poorly done hand-drawn art is still poorly done art. Be a Poser (or better yet, use DAZ Studio 3D) - dare to be different.
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Re: One Summer Night... [BxG][Romance]
Starting out simple is a good idea.
If possible, please give us more information about your two characters and their conflicts. It will help to know what makes them unique, and what might be keeping them from becoming a couple.
If possible, please give us more information about your two characters and their conflicts. It will help to know what makes them unique, and what might be keeping them from becoming a couple.
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