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#76 Post by try10 » Sun Jul 29, 2012 11:15 am

I'm soo going to stalk this thread for a while. SUCH BEAUTIFUL ART!!!!! :D

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#77 Post by Kie » Sat Aug 11, 2012 6:16 pm

The art looks so well done! I'm really glad that a game like this that looks so professional is free and the concept is so awesome. The protag doesn't seem like your typical otome one, so I'm really glad about that. I'm aiming for Gille first thing I can!

Something that's been bothering me though is that "Rêve Symphonie" would be the wrong way of translating "Dream Symphony," since it'd be the literal version and not the intended expression. What would be a more correct translation is "Symphonie à Rêver" or "Symphonie des Rêves." The first translation would be more like "Dream/Ideal Symphony" while the other would be like " The Symphony of Dreams." I think the first one is what you're aiming for, though, and is more gramatically correct. Sorry for that but the grammar was just bugging me and I wouldn't want a wrongly translated title for such hard work.

Also, the text is just a little too close to the character for comfort here. Maybe you can space it out a little more?
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#78 Post by nottiebutt » Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:54 pm

I'm in love, here.
Don't mind me, just gonna be staring at this beauty.

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#79 Post by Rem-chan » Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:40 pm

This game looks promising *O* I'll keep an eye on it! Ganbattee!!

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#80 Post by TheSnowflakeOfDoom » Sun Aug 19, 2012 4:37 am

Ahh!~ Thank you! Our artist is amazing! And Megan (The one writing it!) Is amazing at writing! I just need to keep up with the coding ;n;

A demo should be out soon!
Kie wrote:The art looks so well done! I'm really glad that a game like this that looks so professional is free and the concept is so awesome. The protag doesn't seem like your typical otome one, so I'm really glad about that. I'm aiming for Gille first thing I can!

Something that's been bothering me though is that "Rêve Symphonie" would be the wrong way of translating "Dream Symphony," since it'd be the literal version and not the intended expression. What would be a more correct translation is "Symphonie à Rêver" or "Symphonie des Rêves." The first translation would be more like "Dream/Ideal Symphony" while the other would be like " The Symphony of Dreams." I think the first one is what you're aiming for, though, and is more gramatically correct. Sorry for that but the grammar was just bugging me and I wouldn't want a wrongly translated title for such hard work.

Also, the text is just a little too close to the character for comfort here. Maybe you can space it out a little more?
Thank you!~
I'll go fix the text thing right away! (I changed the text a bit, so I must have forgot to change the spacing.)
Sorry! My bad xD French was never my strong point! I'll ask to change it right away! Symphonie des Rêves would probably be the one we'd go for then! Thank you, and sorry, again!
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Rem-chan wrote:This game looks promising *O* I'll keep an eye on it! Ganbattee!!


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#81 Post by Celestine » Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:02 pm

This is pretty interesting game here!
Are you going to have musical instruments in sound effects?

The tests sounds like a good idea to have since you have a music game. It'll be a bit more challenging. (Lol. Even though it's going to be a pain since I forgot how to read music score sheet. Sigh looks like have to brush up on my music notes reading.)
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#82 Post by otomegirl24 » Thu Sep 20, 2012 12:15 pm

Ooooh, this looks like a really fun game! I look forward to the day it's finished!

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#83 Post by MarineScripter » Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:50 pm

Heck, how's it free? It looks fantastic. Your characters have personality, variation, and they're all super awesomeamazingasdfghjkl at the same time! Great job, it looks like it's going to rock.
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#84 Post by Lost-Guitarist » Sat Sep 22, 2012 11:17 am

Wow! This game looks amazing! I can't wait for this one :)

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#85 Post by TheSnowflakeOfDoom » Sat Sep 22, 2012 2:17 pm

Hello! It's Megan here, the other one working on this game, eheh.

Thank you all so much for your continued support for this game! uwu ♥ I'm the writer for this whole thing, so I hope I can live up to your expectations...

We haven't mentioned it on the first post, however there is actually one more character available! Her name is Violet Amati, and she's the viola (therefore, Cel's younger sister) and Harmonia's best friend.

Currently, Elliot's route has the most work put into it (what can I say, I'm biased) and Kirsty has the majority of the demo done... I need to edit and spellcheck the demo once again, then round it off. It should be up within three weeks or so.

Once again, thanks for all your support! It's thanks to all of you that Kirsty and I have really been motivated to work on this little project, and we really, really hope you'll all enjoy it! ♥

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#86 Post by Aedin » Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:25 am

I...get to woo a piano? Finally!
This looks like it'll be a ton of fun. I can tell from the scene shot that it's going to be interesting, to say the least. The sprites are gorgeous and this is a really original idea. So, I wish you luck and shall be looking forward to playing your lovely game.
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#87 Post by AshenhartKrie » Sun Sep 23, 2012 4:31 am

LA~ This really does look awesome, and I too, cannot wait until this is finished. I also concur with every single statement somehow mentioning locking you in a dungeon or other variations of said statements if you do not finish it. If you like, I can proofread it if nobody else has offered. I really can't be bothered to read every single comment....I'm so lazy

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#88 Post by Hannahchu » Mon Sep 24, 2012 12:12 pm

I'm really impressed with this, from the unique storyline I haven't come across before and the quality of the art. I wish you luck in its development and look forward to a release.

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#89 Post by DangoRiceBalls » Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:27 pm

Looks goood. :3 Excited to see it.
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#90 Post by michi 18 » Wed Oct 03, 2012 4:37 am

May I ask when will the game or maybe the demo be released?
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