NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery] COMPLETED

[clua]

Thank you for your suggestion!!
It will really help me to modify the game.

+Actually, my purpose to put the main character Nacira beside the other char is so the reader can see how Nacira interact with others.
But maybe I will also make it inside the textbox and see what's the best idea for this..
+I never knew about {w=.2} I will definitely put it on the script
+And yes, because of the trial deadline, the sprite coloring was handled by 3 person, but I will polish the sprite, so it will look the same..
+Actually about the timeline, I just made it up, but now that you mention it, I will think something other than that..

Once again, thank you clua!

XD Im very glad! btw the {w=.2} you can use {w=1} or {w=.6} or etc! depending of how much do you want it to wait

[IonicMomo]

Wait wait...is this partially inspired by The Mahabharata? (As in, the Indian ancient epic?)

I'm assuming it is, since you have the Pandava brothers? But I just wanted to confirm.

I always thought that The Mahabharata would make great material for a VN. I mean, it literally does have a harem aspect--Draupadi marries all five brothers, doesn't she?

[ngareci]

A history-based game? Color me impressed. May I ask which exact period is this game set in?

I'm no expert on the history of ancient Java, however. Chances are I'll have to jump on Wikipedia or JSTOR to find out the details before I can comment on the historical accuracy aspect of this game.

Hmm, I don't know about history base, because Pandawa is a myth, like norse myth. And I twisted the background because I want to mix the traditional Indonesia kingdom with europe style a little bit.

there's a clock tower in this story

Weh, orang indo kah? Teratrik sama yang bisa promosi budaya indonesia sekalian dalam bentuk VN, hehe

If you need beta tester, I'll be available. Nice work!
Edit : I am a javanese too, so glad to see you picked java as the background XD

Yap, saya orang indo, saya sangat suka wayang, terutama pandawa, dan itung2 promosi juga supaya anak muda suka wayang~

And a javanesse! Nice to know you, please read my PM..

I love the music in the main menu! It's like a mix of gamelan and regular beats, very classy!

The english in this demo isn't that proficient and if you need help with the dialogue and stuff, I'd be happy to help!

Thank you!!
I tell the composer that, and he also said thank you!
And the dialogue definitely will be improve, thank you for the offer!

Wait wait...is this partially inspired by The Mahabharata? (As in, the Indian ancient epic?)

I'm assuming it is, since you have the Pandava brothers? But I just wanted to confirm.

I always thought that The Mahabharata would make great material for a VN. I mean, it literally does have a harem aspect--Draupadi marries all five brothers, doesn't she?

Yes, it was inspired by Mahabarata, but I use the Javanesse version, since I was a Javanesse, and Pandava is Pandawa here..
Yes, I'm agree with you, pandawa otome game was my dream , and since nobody make VN base on that, so I decide to make one...

[eternalwishess]

The culture seems to be very nicely designed and neatly incorporated into this story. I can't wait until this comes out. *_____*

[Katty16]

I love Sadewa, he is so cute :3
Looking forward to play it

[[insert name here]]

Wah... akhirnya ada VN kayak gini... Udah kutunggu2 nih
Berhubung ada Pandawanya, ini ada perang2an wayangnya enggak? Ato cuman Dating Sim biasa
Apa cuman aku doang yang ngerasain Nakula sama Sadewa kayak artis korea?

Good luck for your project

[ngareci]

The culture seems to be very nicely designed and neatly incorporated into this story. I can't wait until this comes out. *_____*

I love Sadewa, he is so cute :3
Looking forward to play it

Thank you for the support! XD

Wah... akhirnya ada VN kayak gini... Udah kutunggu2 nih
Berhubung ada Pandawanya, ini ada perang2an wayangnya enggak? Ato cuman Dating Sim biasa
Apa cuman aku doang yang ngerasain Nakula sama Sadewa kayak artis korea?

Good luck for your project

Nggak ada perang2annya kok, haha..
saya maunya yang simpel, jadi cuma VN datesim aja..
Nakula sadewa mmg ganteng, dan semua char dibuat seganteng mungkin XD
makasih yaa..

[fallenangel198]

i cant wait for this game to come out im seriously loking forward to it good luck

[Ordog]

Your game is really attractive (the drawing and all are really beautiful). I'll be playing the Demo then !!!

[ngareci]

i cant wait for this game to come out im seriously loking forward to it good luck

Thank you!

Your game is really attractive (the drawing and all are really beautiful). I'll be playing the Demo then !!!

Thank you! Tell me if you have any feedback for better final

[EroBotan]

this looks interesting but I think that this Mahabharata stuff is happen in India ... o.o

I'm not an expert in Mahabharata epic, but I suggest to rename Pandawa to Pandava, Werkudara to Bhima and Sadewa to Sahadeva. I think it's better to use their original name instead of localized names especially if you're aiming for international release

[ngareci]

this looks interesting but I think that this Mahabharata stuff is happen in India ... o.o

I'm not an expert in Mahabharata epic, but I suggest to rename Pandawa to Pandava, Werkudara to Bhima and Sadewa to Sahadeva. I think it's better to use their original name instead of localized names especially if you're aiming for international release

Thank you for suggestion!
Yes, it's from India, but according to the history, the ancient people of India brought their culture, including mahabharatha epic, to Indonesia, thus, indonesian adapted the story according to their own culture so that it could be easily accepted among the society.
and so, I present to you, the indonesian adaptation version of the epic Mahabharata's characters, including this version's way of naming and clothing (It reminds me, I have to make a disclaimer for this)

[Snowruins]

I'm downloading the demo~ xD Can't wait to play it! =D;;

[tiya_nofurita]

Very nice concept and idea ~
Proud to be Javanese and Indonesian XD
I'm looking forward to see your progress

Btw I'm Indonesian too ! Nice to meet many Indo people on LSF ^^

[ngareci]

I'm downloading the demo~ xD Can't wait to play it! =D;;

Very nice concept and idea ~
Proud to be Javanese and Indonesian XD
I'm looking forward to see your progress

Btw I'm Indonesian too ! Nice to meet many Indo people on LSF ^^

Thank you! Nice to meet another Indonesian~! XD