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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#76 Post by starshylea18 » Thu Jan 03, 2013 6:46 pm

Sadewa Kun~ Let me Love Chu~!

+ What's the best part of the trial? - The kitchen Scene~
+ Who is your fave character? - Sadewa Kun~
+ What can be improved from this game? - I wish the demo was longer~
+ Any other comment? : I certainly look forward to this~

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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#77 Post by WickedRaccoon » Fri Jan 04, 2013 10:04 am

Oh,nice backrounds! I adore the detail on the doors and ceiling on the second image,and the fabric folds on the first one ^^

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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#78 Post by ngareci » Tue Jan 08, 2013 7:51 am

Thank you!!

Now, the main script has already finalized, now I'm waiting for the endings, while working for promotional video. It needs the CGs.
The bad news is, my artist seems having some personal trouble and cannot do the CGs. I'll contact him later when he's calm..
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#79 Post by WickedRaccoon » Tue Jan 08, 2013 12:26 pm

Oh wow,you finished the script? That's terrific! Congrats! ^^ And there's going to be a promotional video? Now that's some effin awesome stuff right there!
Oh,shoot! Hope he's okay and nothing too serious happend! o_o;;

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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#80 Post by ngareci » Wed Jan 09, 2013 7:20 am

WickedRaccoon wrote: Going to throw another idea for the main menu now. Instead of resizing the guys,what if you changed the box-like frames,and make a Pandawa styled frame? It saves up space,cause you only show the guy's faces and it gives you more options in re-arraging their possitions.
Hi, I try to make the new main menu as you suggested, but with pandawa's frame, it's not turn out just like I expected..
So, I keep on box frame but smaller and just pandawa's little face shown to keep mysterious aura..
check it out!~ :D

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#81 Post by mirelle » Wed Jan 09, 2013 2:05 pm

*itches to try making the menu herself*
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#82 Post by ngareci » Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:01 pm

mirelle wrote:*itches to try making the menu herself*
Wait, I'll be back with the new menu
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#83 Post by ngareci » Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:41 pm

Well, perhaps this is better..
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#84 Post by Kyuun » Thu Jan 10, 2013 6:26 am

ngareci wrote:
WickedRaccoon wrote: Going to throw another idea for the main menu now. Instead of resizing the guys,what if you changed the box-like frames,and make a Pandawa styled frame? It saves up space,cause you only show the guy's faces and it gives you more options in re-arraging their possitions.
Hi, I try to make the new main menu as you suggested, but with pandawa's frame, it's not turn out just like I expected..
So, I keep on box frame but smaller and just pandawa's little face shown to keep mysterious aura..
check it out!~ :D

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^I think this is a really nice main menu screen but the only problem is that the colouring for 'NACIRA' goes out of the actual lineart (or is it supposed to...?). Just saying, haha. But anyways, I'm looking forward to playing the full version of this game - I really love the character designs, and the colouring you used for them. Good luck with making the game! c:

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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#85 Post by WickedRaccoon » Thu Jan 10, 2013 12:09 pm

ngareci wrote: Hi, I try to make the new main menu as you suggested, but with pandawa's frame, it's not turn out just like I expected..
So, I keep on box frame but smaller and just pandawa's little face shown to keep mysterious aura..
check it out!~ :D

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ngareci wrote:Well, perhaps this is better..
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They both look great. You did an amazing job!
The first one does give out the mysterious aura,and it still looks good even without the Pandawa frames. The frame backrounds are simply stunning!
Hahaha took me a while to notice this,but does the shadow figure behind Nacira belongs to Nyikara? XD
The second ones gives a calm and somewhat historic aura,just by looking at the image you can tell this is set in the ancient times.
Really,both are awesome,can't say which ones look better. But for some reason,I think the first one would make a better main menu. Choice is yours ^^

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#86 Post by ngareci » Thu Jan 10, 2013 2:05 pm

Thank you!!
Guess I'll be using the second, I like the color combination, and it's also related to the opening of the video..
Good news, I have a friend who willing to do the coding for the menus!
He said that he'll try his best, and I also wish for the best.. :D

Here's the remake of the options...

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19 more days to go!
I'm getting panicked, but I'll keep the updating this topic to see the track.. 8)
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#87 Post by WickedRaccoon » Thu Jan 10, 2013 4:52 pm

Oh,if the second main menu is related to the opening video,then I agree with you.
That is a b-e-a-utiful options menu! Like the fact he kept the same color choice and backround. The new decoration is so adorable ^ω^ Hope to see more of his work!
(19 days? Wow,time flew by fast! That means...Nacira is nearly completed! *^*)9 Hooray!!!) Don't get panicked. Even if you don't make the deadline and need more time,do so. Better finishing this project taking all the time you need then rushing it. We will still be here even after the 30th of January :'D

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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#88 Post by AERenoir » Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:24 pm

Wakakakakaka, ga nyangka bakal lihat ada otome game dengan tema Indonesia gini....

Belom selesai main demonya, tapi lagunya bagus. Dapet lagu Gamelan gitu dari mana?

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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#89 Post by ShadowBerry » Mon Jan 14, 2013 5:28 pm

english please? oO
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Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

#90 Post by ngareci » Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:51 pm

WickedRaccoon wrote:
Hahaha took me a while to notice this,but does the shadow figure behind Nacira belongs to Nyikara? XD
I'm forgot to answer this..
Yes it's her.. :D
AERenoir wrote:Wakakakakaka, ga nyangka bakal lihat ada otome game dengan tema Indonesia gini....

Belom selesai main demonya, tapi lagunya bagus. Dapet lagu Gamelan gitu dari mana?
Umm, I'll answer it in English, okay!~

Thank you, I have a passion to bring up java culture in this game, because it's so beautiful~
And for the gamelan song, my musician just manipulate it from fruityloops, they're so great at it, I'm very proud of them.. :D


I have no updates this time because it's near the end of my holiday and many etc bussiness comes around.. :cry:
Another problem occur is for the proofreader, hopefully she answer my email soon..
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