NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery] COMPLETED

[ShadowBerry]

*fell in love with Arjuna at first sight*
I love how you can draw the hair...it looks so awesome O:

I like the story, it doesnt sound so mainstream ^^, even though the characters (expect Puntadewa) look quite expressionless o_o

My favourite character so far is Nakula xD
He and Sadewa remind me of the twins from Heart no kuni no alice. so adorable <3

Good luck with this, im gonna have a look every now and then ;P

[ngareci]

*fell in love with Arjuna at first sight*
I love how you can draw the hair...it looks so awesome O:

I like the story, it doesnt sound so mainstream ^^, even though the characters (expect Puntadewa) look quite expressionless o_o

My favourite character so far is Nakula xD
He and Sadewa remind me of the twins from Heart no kuni no alice. so adorable <3

Good luck with this, im gonna have a look every now and then ;P

Thank you! Alright, I'll look for heart no kuni no alice for research..
Nakula is quite childish and the most funny among his brothers, nice choice!
And the expression of the sprites will be upgraded sir, dont worry..

[ShadowBerry]

Haha, well in the anime they are the same...understand each other perfectly and always work together xD
So Sadewa would kind of fall out of that, but still they remind me of them^^

Oh okay, but please no Sir, I'm a lady.. xD ~no joke~
Yeah that's why I like Nakula so far...the rest isn't so...immature and such xD

[ngareci]

Alright madam~!
Twins figure always interesting, like the one in ouran highschool..
Well, I'll try my best to keep their characteristics alive~!

[ShadowBerry]

Yeah exactly like them, haha.
Twins are always interesting. Because they are often the same I wonder if they react in a different way when they"e with the girl they like and such xD

Good, good. Don"t let them become mainstream D:< xDD

[Daistarir]

So . . . A.M.A.Z.I.N.G ! ! !xD . Love the art!

[Wirelessheart]

I cant wait for it to come out!!! O///A///O
PS: I love the characters i'll be cheer you on! >///x///<

[ngareci]

Good, good. Don"t let them become mainstream D:< xDD

Right away, madam~!

So . . . A.M.A.Z.I.N.G ! ! !xD . Love the art!

I cant wait for it to come out!!! O///A///O
PS: I love the characters i'll be cheer you on! >///x///<

It courage me a lot, thank you!!

[YukiBella]

<=3 Love the art~~ also demo was FANTASTIC! can't wait to play the completed version XD Fell in love with Arjuna but I also secretly love Puntadewa. >////<

[ngareci]

<=3 Love the art~~ also demo was FANTASTIC! can't wait to play the completed version XD Fell in love with Arjuna but I also secretly love Puntadewa. >////<

Thank you!! One more love for Arjuna, haha..

[tiya_nofurita]

Okay ! I have downloaded it and played it until 3rd Days ! Guess it's about the time I give a feedback, no ? XD

1.I like the concept, it seems pretty original and interesting to me. As an Indonesian and Javanese I'm very proud of your game *thumbsup*
Not to mention the

love letter

thingy...it's really got my feeling because I can understand the language (well, not all, but in general XD)

2.The BG and the character is really good and original, great work with the traditional costume xD
Oh, and the palace ! It would be better if you can show the player the whole huge and gorgeous palace, not just a part of it

3.As for the music, well, I played it without a sound so I can't give you any comments

4.I found some obviously grammar errors on this game, well, maybe I have to say, too many. I'm not expert at English either but I'm certain that I encountered some grammatical errors. There are also some, uh, some sentences that sounds...doesn't fit or weird (or maybe it just my feelings).
As an Indonesian, I understand this problem, and I suggest you find some proofreader before releasing your game. Good luck !

5.The textbox is well modified, but the other screens (like main menu, game menu and choice screen) still lack of touch
You know what I mean ? Yeah, customization ! I believe you can do it so the game will look prettier . The writing on choice menu seems rather unreadable, maybe you should change it somehow

All of all, I appreciated your work very much, and
GOOD LUCK

[ngareci]

Okay ! I have downloaded it and played it until 3rd Days ! Guess it's about the time I give a feedback, no ? XD

1.I like the concept, it seems pretty original and interesting to me. As an Indonesian and Javanese I'm very proud of your game *thumbsup*
Not to mention the

love letter

thingy...it's really got my feeling because I can understand the language (well, not all, but in general XD)

2.The BG and the character is really good and original, great work with the traditional costume xD
Oh, and the palace ! It would be better if you can show the player the whole huge and gorgeous palace, not just a part of it

3.As for the music, well, I played it without a sound so I can't give you any comments

4.I found some obviously grammar errors on this game, well, maybe I have to say, too many. I'm not expert at English either but I'm certain that I encountered some grammatical errors. There are also some, uh, some sentences that sounds...doesn't fit or weird (or maybe it just my feelings).
As an Indonesian, I understand this problem, and I suggest you find some proofreader before releasing your game. Good luck !

5.The textbox is well modified, but the other screens (like main menu, game menu and choice screen) still lack of touch
You know what I mean ? Yeah, customization ! I believe you can do it so the game will look prettier . The writing on choice menu seems rather unreadable, maybe you should change it somehow

All of all, I appreciated your work very much, and
GOOD LUCK

Hello tiya! Thank you for playing the demo~!

1. Haha, the words in love letter, I'm suck at javanese krama language, but I want to make it like a sacred one, so I just mix these things up with ngoko and bahasa indonesia..

2. Thank you! I'm having a pretty difficulties with the palace, I wish I could visit Jogja's palace, for references..
And the other reason why I love to use javanese's traditional costume is, for the guy one they're topless, and that makes the sprites more bishilicious

3. No problem~

4. Yes, I've asked some people to be my proofreader, hopefully the final version will be going right..

5. It's pretty interesting, and you've got the point there, but, I don't know how to change them, but I will searching how to do that, it will make the game more beautiful..

And thank you for the feedback, tiya!! XD

[WickedRaccoon]

reallyyyyyyyyyyy love this game!!!!when will the full game be released?

[tiya_nofurita]

It's pretty interesting, and you've got the point there, but, I don't know how to change them, but I will searching how to do that, it will make the game more beautiful..

Hope it will help you
Customizing Text Box
Customizing Menus

[izukwon]

UWAUWAUWAUWAUWUAUWA I love everything about Pandawa stories (I loved Garudayana comic book hehe) so I'm digging this. Wawawawa can't wait to play it. The art looks good too QAQ;;

EDIT: THE DEVELOPERS ARE GENSHIKEN ITB MEMBERS? Wow which ones are you? We are in the same campus, ahaha, funny. And I was once a member of Genshiken too until I magically disappeared :/