Love at the Laundromat [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama] DEMO UP

[Fungii]

Yes! Love that Miles, perfect midway between the two.

[selenity136]

Totally dig this look! And the outfit as well

[Nische]

Ah, um . . . I'm only one person. Don't put too much stock on my opinion.

Even so, everyone's opinion is important. (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
Again, thank you so much!

Yes! Love that Miles, perfect midway between the two.

Ah, I'm so glad.
I was worried I ruined Miles. >_<

Totally dig this look! And the outfit as well

Thank you! :'D
I'll be posting the rest of his outfits in a bit. (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)

[FatUnicornGames]

I agree. Much better.

[Onionchan]

I know that a lot of the things I'm going to say have already been mentioned, but I'll just let you know anyways ^_^

Miles: I definitely liked the old Miles better. I felt that the old Miles really captured his "kind, motherhen" nature, whilst the new one makes you think twice about his character. Like there's something about him that's just not right (and not in an entirely good way). I think its his hair and the more slanted eyes. I liked the old hand clasp better as well, since it looked a lot more realistic and the necklace definitely looked much better when it was tucked inside his top. I do have to say that your new "draft sketch" of him looks really promising, and if he were to look like that in the final version - he'd be for sure dateable to me! ^_^

Lynette: The brighter colour hair really brought out her complexion, and made her more appealing visually as a character. But if the darker colour scheme is to suit her personality, then I suppose it would be the better choice.

Soliel: Love, love, love his redesign! He looks so much more amazing than before, and his other seasonal looks/haircuts were much better than I expected. I do have to say that his Summer outfit and hairstyle was my absolute favourite. I did notice that his crotch seemed a little... strange in the poses though, and that his hips seemed a little too big in 1, 3, and 4. Maybe it's just me haha ^_^" But he's definitely second on my list of dateable bachelors.

Nicholas: Great redesign, there's really nothing that I don't like.

Eli: Same as Nicholas. He's a lot more dateable now than he was before :)

On a side note, the backgrounds you posted before looked absolutely beautiful!! If they were included in the final version, it pretty much doubles my excitement for the game twofold haha. Nice progress on the game, and I look forward to seeing more updates! :D

[MomoiroGirl]

HAHAHAHA!
I'll fix it, I'll fix it. xD

That's a pretty good edit though considering you only had the PNG to work with *A*
Thank you very much!

Hahah thank you XDDD It was just a quickie though, and just to give an idea as to what it probably should look like (Aka, what it should look like-ish XDDD)

Anyway I'm seconding Onionchan on the hip-thing, 'his' right hip seems off. I think you aimed for it to look like he is shooting his hip out to the side, as a model-ish pose, but it may be over-exaggerated, maybe if the pants were pulled down just a bit, it would still look like his hip is shooting to the side

(Note, sorry for being very fingerpointing (or whatever? .____.), I only keep pointing things out, cause i know you can do it, cause every other sprite is absolutely amazing! )

It may not be much of a help, but if you like, I can try and do some edits on Sol's hips on his sprites, if I'm kind of unclear as to what it is that looks off :/

Anyways, as usual, looking good, so keep up with the awesome job you're doing!

[Nische]

The term ends in a few more weeks and I seriously need to start working on my final projects (6 subjects I need to cram...) That being said, I might not be able to update this game till my schoolwork is done. :/

I'll reply to everyone and fix Miles when I get back. :')

[GeneDNC]

New Miles is shaping up nicely. I prefer all the new sprites compared to their old ones. Lynette's old one made her look much older to me... and kinda housewife-y. Good luck with your school work! We'll be here waiting patiently till you get back.

[Nische]

I know I said I wouldn't touch this until my finals are done but the urge to make this game is too strong. ;_;
Anyway, updates have been made. The dimension of the game are now 1024x600. *A*

Demo's Main Menu: (Will change on official release)


Settings:


Save/Load:


Laundry Outfit for Eli, Nicholas and Sol:



Still working on Miles though. ;_;

On a non-latl related note: We finally decided on an official group name *A*
I'll announce it ounce the website is set up so I'd have something to show for it :')

[ra-nyan]

DAT SEXY SOL :Q

I'm really loving all of the updates and changes

[Nische]

Got the first background from the artist. I'm absolutely in love with it. *A*
I must make more money to order more. D':

[jack_norton]

The background is really nice indeed!

[Razz]

That background is jawdropping! This game is looking so polished!

[Sharm]

Who's your background artist? I'd like to stalk them on DA too!

[Deji]

Wow, that's a super pretty background!
I wish I could draw backgrounds like that ;O;

You should post a test with the sprite, the BG and the GUI, I'm sure it'll look gorgeous!