Love at the Laundromat [GxB][Romance, Comedy, Drama] DEMO UP

[KittyKatStar]

The designs are awesome! (I love the kitty shirt.) So yea, don't see anything wrong on my end, I think they're all great.

[ehcs]

Thanks for the feedback KittyKatStar and ShadowBerry!

Update 01/16/13
Altered the outfit of one character and sketched up 3 more.

[MioSegami]

OMG OMG THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL!!! <333

[Lumella]

I'm in love with the woman in the middle of the first row ♥
So gorgeous.
/o/ KEEP IT UP!

[FatUnicornGames]

Glad to see you back hun!

[KittyKatStar]

Love them! ^^

[Blane Doyle]

I don't know why this didn't catch my attention sooner. I love otome games, I love stat raising, and the art looks very nice. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going to go now that I have taken the time to look at it. I should have done this sooner.

[ShadowBerry]

uuuh the guy looks hot *__*
awesome work as always~

[MomoiroGirl]

Why the hell is that sexy-ass, tan guy with the checkered shirt not a love interest??!! D8 They're looking great!

[FarahElshami]

suppeeeeerrrrr!!! *fan girl scream*, the guys are lookin' HOT, and i bet the plot will be amazing!! keep up the good work )

[ehcs]

@MioSegami, @KittyKatStar, @Blane Doyle, @ShadowBerry, @FarahElshami
Thank you very much!

@MomoiroGirl
He could be. ;P
(well, it's something I can look into but I'm not making any promises right now. If ever he does become a love interest, he'd probably only have 5 scenes instead of the 10 scenes. >: )

@Lumella
Thank you!
Can't wait to see more updates from you as well. Good luck meeting the deadlines! xD

@FatUnicornGames
I can say the same for you.
You're already getting fan art, I'm so jealous! xD

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UPDATE 01/28/13
Sorry for the lack of update last week. A friend of mine introduced me to both Dragon Age 2 and Guild Wars 2. Between the two of them, I barely even had time to eat and sleep. I've cooled down my desire to play games enough to actually start getting things done again.

Anyway,I remember mentioning that I'd change Eli's hair. I ended up going overboard with the fix again. Here's Eli's alterations and his 3 in game poses. These are just sketches, I'll start finalizing once all the characters have been sketched out. Feedback is loved!






I've also been meaning to be more active on tumblr.
For anyone who's interested, this is it.

[RunicV]

Were you intending to make Eli into the shota character? Now he looks a lot younger than he was before. While that may have been a good thing, I think I preferred his old design. It seems to fit the artist look more. Now he just looks like an innocent teenager. Of course, that's just my opinion.

[ehcs]

Were you intending to make Eli into the shota character? Now he looks a lot younger than he was before. While that may have been a good thing, I think I preferred his old design. It seems to fit the artist look more. Now he just looks like an innocent teenager. Of course, that's just my opinion.

Kind of? Eli's route is more of the puppy love romance kind of thing so part of the redesign was to try to make him more youthful and innocent without making him look like a girl (which was difficult). I hope he doesn't look so young that he's become unappealing though. Which part of his old design would you say suited him best? His clothes, hair, or structure all together? Maybe I can still fix him up a bit more before I move on to the next character.

When it comes to age: Eli is in his late teens, he's 18. Lynnette is a year older than him.

Thank you so much for your continued feedback! :'D
They've been very helpful. :')

[EchoLove]

Hmm I have to agree, I did like Eli's old design better. I think it's because I think his hair style makes him look WAY younger than 18, he loooks around 15 to me. But that's just my opinion, to me his old design reminded me a bit of Otani from Lovely Complex which made me really like him xD But like I said it's your designs

[KittyKatStar]

I actually like both designs for Eli. ^^; And he does look younger/more innocent in the redesign. So the final one you pick, I'd be happy with either since they're both adorable.