Luna's Charm ~ [On hold]

[Egressus]

Yeah, sorry about that. Well, Utau does seem like a girl who'd use that sort of name but I'm pretty sure her Shugo Charas are angel and demons, aren't they? I don't really remember, given I've only read fanfictions. I remember her being a bit punkish, so that names aren't surprising.
But you seem to go for a nicer take, so I figured I'd say it.

[Cue-san]

wow it seems cute the name luna reminds me of sailor moon. Well goodluck with it !

Aww, Thank you ! Yup yup. Let's hope to be finish it clean and nicely.

[Katty16]

This game looks nice
Good luck with it

[michi 18]

well im soo excited!!to play the game wish u luck again!

[Arelune]

Uu,, Thanks Arelune. You're a big help ! I now changed it to yours, and I edit some weird sentences (You say.) Thanks again .
(You can ask me too for help if you're making VN. )

Oh, that's quite alright. I'm still just tinkering around with my stories. ^^

There are two things you still might want to change though:
'she will met a man who will make her happy.' -> 'she wil meet a man who will make her happy.'
'she can transform into different person, aside from her true and normal self.' -> 'she can transform into a different person.' (the last part is a bit redundant)

[Cue-san]

@Egressus : Yeah, i just search it right on wiki... so maybe that's her name representing her character over.
thanks!

@katty 16 : thanks ! I hope you'll be able to wait and play it!

@Michi : Haha! thanks again !

@Arelune, thanks again. You're like an observer XD. Thanks for your support DD. I really adore you *o*
BTW, Fuu ~ I'm sketching 4 chara's already and none of them are linearted already. XD ! Please just w8 more a little. . School days are very busy D:

[Cue-san]

Fuuu.. ~ Sketching is harder that I think XD.
*Busy busy*

[maya-ya16]

Ha, So this is it ? .
Fine. Long haired character boy is enough okay ?
.. The Story is already fine. Don't change it anymore ..

[maya-ya16]

Ah, and one more time, Anne .. Message me about the Backgrounds and the colors. Wish us Luck !

[Cue-san]

@ Maya-chan , Yup !. Sorry for the bother. But please do it, I'm in a rush mode DDD