The Abandoned Land (Fantasy, KN)
Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 12:18 am
Hello there, this is my first VN, so please bear with me. I am still starting on this VN, but the story itself have been my personal hobby for quite some time. So, here is the info for this VN.
Title : The Abandoned Land
Description:
“Well, I thought today was going to be just another day of the week. Little that I known today mark the day that changed the way I live my life.”
“That sentence may seem too exaggerating coming from me. But an extreme expression suits an extreme condition, don’t you think so?”
The world we live in look quite mundane, but who knows that in this world, there are also gates to another world. Zerdow, an average college student, is drawn into one of this world by accident, or is it? The world where strange creatures live and where magic become a reality. In this world, he held the role of "The one this land awaits". Follow his adventure and meeting against many character there.
Character:
Zerdow (Main Protagonist)
"My name is Zerdow I don’t have a last name. Don’t ask me why. I’ve asked the same thing once when I was still a little boy and my mother answer is that "it is much easier this way"."
Koharu Kojima
"I am not used to sit on the chair. And I am just another employee in this mansion. It is improper for to me sit on the same level as an honored guest such as yourself."
Scarlet
"Don’t’ slack off now, the flowerbeds need to be taken care properly. It’s almost their season to bloom."
Dante Shautfell Carollo
"As I said before, I’m not like that at all. What is up with people making up a crazy story like that?"
Tyrus Zigward
"My bat and my eyes can only see what is skin deep. Matter that’s personal or related to one’s mind is hard to be investigated. It doesn’t mean I can’t do it."
Celena von Ricksthon
"Yes, but beside taking care soldier, they have knowledge in how to make medicine from local plant. I think the two of them can give a lot of help"
Veronica von Grishorn
"Yes, good morning. This is my daily routine. I do this daily to prevent my technique getting rusty."
Crew:
Shad12ow : Programmer, Writer, GUI Designer
lycheechan : Char Concept ( inactive)
Hazel-Bun : Sprite Artist
squark : Proofreader
Status:
Story : 100% (Proofread, Edited, Done for now.)
Script : 50%
GUI : 100% (Title, Menu, Save Load, Textbox, Preference, and Quick Menu. All working.)
Concept art : 10% (A few sprite concept art has been completed)
Sprites : 0%
CGs : 0%
Music : 50% (Collect enough public domain music, but still need to choose which music goes where.)
Statistics:
The game contains 805 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 6,488 words,
for an average of 8.1 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.
The screenshot for now is attached.
And I'll upload a demo that played until the end of chapter1, although chapter 1 still only introduce the main character and story behind it.
Demo :
-25-11-2012-
http://www.mediafire.com/?rwbz3x5mr913bwr (Win)
http://www.mediafire.com/?f9xsdymkdbm6i1d (Mac)
Update 25-11-2012:
Finally an update! Wohoo!
Okay first, the script has been proofread courtesy of squark. Please give him/her a loud round of applause for the hard work!
And second, the concept art for first 3 character is here! It is Zerdow the protagonist, Koharu the kunoichi, and Scarlet the elven maid. The pictures are below.
Well, it seems the time to release another demo is near.
Update 20-06-2013:
Okay another sprite sketch is done. It is Dante, the Shadow Island original ruler.
Please give me your comment.
I'm sure it still has a long way to go.
Once again thank you for reading this and good luck to all of you out there!
Title : The Abandoned Land
Description:
“Well, I thought today was going to be just another day of the week. Little that I known today mark the day that changed the way I live my life.”
“That sentence may seem too exaggerating coming from me. But an extreme expression suits an extreme condition, don’t you think so?”
The world we live in look quite mundane, but who knows that in this world, there are also gates to another world. Zerdow, an average college student, is drawn into one of this world by accident, or is it? The world where strange creatures live and where magic become a reality. In this world, he held the role of "The one this land awaits". Follow his adventure and meeting against many character there.
Character:
Zerdow (Main Protagonist)
"My name is Zerdow I don’t have a last name. Don’t ask me why. I’ve asked the same thing once when I was still a little boy and my mother answer is that "it is much easier this way"."
Koharu Kojima
"I am not used to sit on the chair. And I am just another employee in this mansion. It is improper for to me sit on the same level as an honored guest such as yourself."
Scarlet
"Don’t’ slack off now, the flowerbeds need to be taken care properly. It’s almost their season to bloom."
Dante Shautfell Carollo
"As I said before, I’m not like that at all. What is up with people making up a crazy story like that?"
Tyrus Zigward
"My bat and my eyes can only see what is skin deep. Matter that’s personal or related to one’s mind is hard to be investigated. It doesn’t mean I can’t do it."
Celena von Ricksthon
"Yes, but beside taking care soldier, they have knowledge in how to make medicine from local plant. I think the two of them can give a lot of help"
Veronica von Grishorn
"Yes, good morning. This is my daily routine. I do this daily to prevent my technique getting rusty."
Crew:
Shad12ow : Programmer, Writer, GUI Designer
lycheechan : Char Concept ( inactive)
Hazel-Bun : Sprite Artist
squark : Proofreader
Status:
Story : 100% (Proofread, Edited, Done for now.)
Script : 50%
GUI : 100% (Title, Menu, Save Load, Textbox, Preference, and Quick Menu. All working.)
Concept art : 10% (A few sprite concept art has been completed)
Sprites : 0%
CGs : 0%
Music : 50% (Collect enough public domain music, but still need to choose which music goes where.)
Statistics:
The game contains 805 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 6,488 words,
for an average of 8.1 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.
The screenshot for now is attached.
And I'll upload a demo that played until the end of chapter1, although chapter 1 still only introduce the main character and story behind it.
Demo :
-25-11-2012-
http://www.mediafire.com/?rwbz3x5mr913bwr (Win)
http://www.mediafire.com/?f9xsdymkdbm6i1d (Mac)
Update 25-11-2012:
Here's the updated and compressed demo. Well, it is only until Chapter 1 though. I'll update the demo as soon as I finished Chapter 2.
Update 13-06-2013:Finally an update! Wohoo!
Okay first, the script has been proofread courtesy of squark. Please give him/her a loud round of applause for the hard work!
And second, the concept art for first 3 character is here! It is Zerdow the protagonist, Koharu the kunoichi, and Scarlet the elven maid. The pictures are below.
Well, it seems the time to release another demo is near.
Update 20-06-2013:
Okay another sprite sketch is done. It is Dante, the Shadow Island original ruler.
Please give me your comment.
I'm sure it still has a long way to go.
Once again thank you for reading this and good luck to all of you out there!
