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Grinning Heart: The Meeting [KN][Fantasy,Comedy][Free]

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 10:37 am
by ngareci
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This is a simple short Kinetic Comedy Novel about a vampire and a lost traveller.
It's about how they're in love each other No, I won't make it that cliche. It's about how's vampire tricked the lost traveller.
The story begins with a bored Vampire who stayed in the castle over thousands years, and he wants something new in his life.
And Suddenly, a traveller with unexpected circumstance, come to his life.
The traveller true self was a famous handsome-man hunter, person who go around the world to take handsome-man's photographs. And the vampire is her next prey.
While she was acting cool, she didn't know that the Vampire can read her mind.


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Characters


Traveller
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She keep unnamed untill the end of the game. She was a hot-blooded naive woman that travel around the world to fullfill her desire: to collect handsome-man photographs as much as she can. Even she always being rejected to take their pictures, she won't give up and will do whatever it takes to do her ambition, as long as it won't hurt her pride. She was a happy-go-lucky type of person anyway.


Vampire
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He also keep unnamed untill the end of the game. He was a cool and tricky person. An immortal that lives for thousand of years. And cannot leave the castle because of a reason. He spend his eternity in boredom, untill the traveller come to save his life.



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Screenshoot

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I just love simple visual novel, and comedy one, that can make me laugh, and can make people laugh. And free~ because free is fun! That's why I create this one.
I made this for around 10 days, and I'm so happy after it was finished.
It's a very simple KN, around 5-10 minutes playtime, just like a sweet snack :lol:

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Rating : 13+
Genre : Kinetic novel, Fantasy, Comedy
Estimate Playtime : 5-10 minutes

English Version
The game contains 269 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 1,387 words,
for an average of 5.2 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.

Bahasa Indonesia Version
The game contains 269 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 1,239 words,
for an average of 4.6 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.

Credits
Story writer, Artist & Coder : Ngareci
Music : Jonathon Roberts (jmtr.com)
Proof reader : TheTourist

Completed
Thank you for visiting this topic!
Every comment will be greatly appreciated :D

Re: Grinning Heart: The Meeting [BxG][KN][Fantasy,Comedy][Fr

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 5:16 pm
by TheTourist
I'd be happy to proofread it for you! like you said, the story's all there, you just need to clean up the grammar. Send me the script. :)

Re: Grinning Heart: The Meeting [BxG][KN][Fantasy,Comedy][Fr

Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 2:48 am
by ngareci
TheTourist wrote:I'd be happy to proofread it for you! like you said, the story's all there, you just need to clean up the grammar. Send me the script. :)
Thank you!! I'll PM you later then..
:D