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About:
- It's my first project and I really want to finish it
- I am doing this game for about... a year alone? Yet, I have only finished the script
- I am planning to release it in 2013 for free
- I am pretty bad at drawing but I want the characters to be look beautiful so I will be doing art revision until I can stand them
- Any feedback would be appropriated
- I am not a native speaker, I hope it won't hurt the game
- If you want to help or ask me about something PM me

Story:
The story takes places in future. The unnamed protagonist (a male painter) lives on a small planet called Athena. Like most of the people there he has problems with his eyes. He cannot see colors. His dream is to see colors so he can be the best artist ever! Since he paid a lot, he was invited to a ship Memphis where doctors may apparently help him. While on the ship he meets several women and it is your choice if you want to pursue a relationship with them.

Features:
- 5 heroines
- many, really many endings
- voice acting

Characters:
to not make this topic too long I have decided to post them here: http://macjulyvn.blogspot.com/

Will update soon!

Status:
Script: 100% (needs to be checked by a native speaker)
Story: 100%
Backgrounds: 0%
CGs: 0%
Sprites: 0% - hehe, redrawing
Music: 0%
Sound Effects: 0%
Voice Acting: 0%
Overall: 20% (?)

I noticed that you say you don't have a native speaker of English?

If I'm reading the title of your story so far it should be

Eyes Don't Matter

Other wise it'd be saying

Eyes It does not matter

I wish you luck with your first project! Writing in English if it isn't your native tongue can be very challenging.

Oh my, my. I feel pretty embarrassed right now! Thank you for your post wakagana, I think I should fix the title now!

I have tried using another pen and I think the art looks a little bit better now:

Don't you think?

I have decided to 'redesign' the characters once again...