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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Oct 9

#61 Post by Hannahchu » Tue Oct 09, 2012 12:53 pm

I love Ten's eyes, and your use of ruffles and attention to detail in clothing; Shira is also beautiful. I've noticed in your other posted art on this thread that you're great with character posing so that the characters look well centered in each piece - like Rek looks so determined and quietly confident!

I also like your avatar icon, I'll have to pm you a picture of my kitten Luffy some time.

Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help, I proof-read, write and beta-test. Not that it looks like you need any help at all.

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Oct 9

#62 Post by bunbun » Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:37 pm

@FatUnicornGames : thank you ^^ I hope this won't just be a game coated with sugar while the story suck or something %@%@#$

@Hannahchu : Ten has some glowing bubble eyes, she secretly wears circle lens *shoot*jk
I didn't notice my character are well centered ^^;
I draw them according to how I think their personality/what fits them but it's really nice of you with your compliment >3<
And yes, Rek is quiet, Im not sure if he's confident or not though...maybe more quietly arrogant? <:

Also thanks for liking my avatar icon. You got me! I'm a big fan of cats. (I have a blog just for cats hahaha)
And yes please do show me your kitten. I really like cats but I am not allowed to keep one so I'll just droll over cat photos. *sob*

I do need help XD especially with my grammar and typos.
I will be sure to open for proof-reading and beta test!
I won't put you on the list now as...I don't know when it will be done.
Do check back again when I open for proof-reading though! I'll be glad if you can help <:
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Oct 9

#63 Post by bunbun » Sun Nov 11, 2012 9:14 am

Promotion art <:
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Also chapter 3 is done, word count 69k.
Off to chap4~
Game resolution changed to 1024 x 768
New co-editor Mocochang joined the group too.
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#64 Post by WickedRaccoon » Sun Nov 11, 2012 10:34 am

8D dat image!it's soooo beautiful!!!

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#65 Post by Azariah » Sun Nov 11, 2012 11:18 am

OH MY. This is so cool, the art is great and as well as the GUI! I'll be looking forward in playing this! :D

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#66 Post by michi 18 » Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:21 am

Is this commercial?
Projects: (I hope you'll support them ) Wisdom Revivalhttp://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=16488 and Universal Hope (Uni-H)http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=16452.

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#67 Post by Tag- » Mon Nov 12, 2012 10:17 am

Wow, that's a really pretty image~ Perfect for showcasing the cast xDD I really like how the colouring was done too :D

Is the logo supposed to be cut off though? It's slightly distracting xD
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#68 Post by Arowana » Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:32 pm

So pretty - I really like the coloring as well, especially how you did the hair! It looks just like a professional promo poster. ^_^
And 69K already, wow! I'm impressed. :) How long do you think the entire game will be?
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#69 Post by crystalxelement » Mon Nov 12, 2012 6:20 pm

Wow, impressive!

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#70 Post by bunbun » Wed Nov 14, 2012 1:39 am

@WickedRaccoon : Thank you very much!

@Azariah : Thank you ^^ If you have any opinion on the GUI feel free to tell me<3

@michi 18 : Nop, it's a freeware for now.

@Tag- : Thank you! I placed the logo cutting it unintentionally in order not to cover the character.
Do you think it'll look better if I resize the logo to fit into the image? ^^;

@Arowana : Hey~ Yeah I'm still experimenting with my coloring style so it keep changing ><
Pretty sure it looks different from how I colored previously ><
I think the game play is worth 2-3 hrs per route now so probably 7-8 hours for the whole game per route?
Not very sure but that's my plan. :3

@crystalxelement : Thank you ^^
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#71 Post by michi 18 » Wed Nov 14, 2012 5:44 am

Yes! What do you mean for now? The full game is freeware?
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#72 Post by Azariah » Wed Nov 14, 2012 5:57 am

bunbun wrote:
@Azariah : Thank you ^^ If you have any opinion on the GUI feel free to tell me<3
Actually, my opinion in the GUI? It's great!!! The simplicity of the GUI makes it very user-friendly (Google taught me that) :D

But if you want, might I suggest for you to add a picture of the character every time the user opens a new menu! :D

For example if the user opens the "Preferences" section, a picture of Ten Lucia will be shown in the background so it would look a little lively! ;D

But then again, this is just a suggestion, please don't be forced on doing this suggestion, ok? I'll feel bad T_T :D
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#73 Post by bunbun » Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:12 am

Sorry for the late reply guys ^^;

@michi 18 : It will be free overall! I just thought I might ask for donation to get back some money I used to commission for this work ><
No worries about paying!

@Azariah : Hey! You gave the same suggestion as my friend!
I thought the GUI was too plain at first too so I modified it (which is the results now). I did try adding character at the background but it looked distracting to me.
I will leave it plain like how it is now. <:
Thanks for suggestion though!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#74 Post by Azariah » Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:55 am

@bunbun: No problem! But yeah, the GUI looks better just like that! Waaahh! :D Looking forward to play this! :D I'll support you and your game all the way! :D Good luck! xD
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11

#75 Post by michi 18 » Fri Nov 16, 2012 7:50 pm

@bunbun:Oh! THat's great! I like your games but I dont have the chance to play them because most of them are commercial.
Projects: (I hope you'll support them ) Wisdom Revivalhttp://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=16488 and Universal Hope (Uni-H)http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=16452.

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