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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Oct 9
I love Ten's eyes, and your use of ruffles and attention to detail in clothing; Shira is also beautiful. I've noticed in your other posted art on this thread that you're great with character posing so that the characters look well centered in each piece - like Rek looks so determined and quietly confident!
I also like your avatar icon, I'll have to pm you a picture of my kitten Luffy some time.
Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help, I proof-read, write and beta-test. Not that it looks like you need any help at all.
Chu~
I also like your avatar icon, I'll have to pm you a picture of my kitten Luffy some time.
Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help, I proof-read, write and beta-test. Not that it looks like you need any help at all.
Chu~
Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Oct 9
@FatUnicornGames : thank you ^^ I hope this won't just be a game coated with sugar while the story suck or something %@%@#$
@Hannahchu : Ten has some glowing bubble eyes, she secretly wears circle lens *shoot*jk
I didn't notice my character are well centered ^^;
I draw them according to how I think their personality/what fits them but it's really nice of you with your compliment >3<
And yes, Rek is quiet, Im not sure if he's confident or not though...maybe more quietly arrogant? <:
Also thanks for liking my avatar icon. You got me! I'm a big fan of cats. (I have a blog just for cats hahaha)
And yes please do show me your kitten. I really like cats but I am not allowed to keep one so I'll just droll over cat photos. *sob*
I do need help XD especially with my grammar and typos.
I will be sure to open for proof-reading and beta test!
I won't put you on the list now as...I don't know when it will be done.
Do check back again when I open for proof-reading though! I'll be glad if you can help <:
@Hannahchu : Ten has some glowing bubble eyes, she secretly wears circle lens *shoot*jk
I didn't notice my character are well centered ^^;
I draw them according to how I think their personality/what fits them but it's really nice of you with your compliment >3<
And yes, Rek is quiet, Im not sure if he's confident or not though...maybe more quietly arrogant? <:
Also thanks for liking my avatar icon. You got me! I'm a big fan of cats. (I have a blog just for cats hahaha)
And yes please do show me your kitten. I really like cats but I am not allowed to keep one so I'll just droll over cat photos. *sob*
I do need help XD especially with my grammar and typos.
I will be sure to open for proof-reading and beta test!
I won't put you on the list now as...I don't know when it will be done.
Do check back again when I open for proof-reading though! I'll be glad if you can help <:
Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Oct 9
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
8D dat image!it's soooo beautiful!!!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
OH MY. This is so cool, the art is great and as well as the GUI! I'll be looking forward in playing this!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
Is this commercial?
Projects: (I hope you'll support them ) Wisdom Revivalhttp://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=16488 and Universal Hope (Uni-H)http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=16452.
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
Wow, that's a really pretty image~ Perfect for showcasing the cast xDD I really like how the colouring was done too
Is the logo supposed to be cut off though? It's slightly distracting xD
Is the logo supposed to be cut off though? It's slightly distracting xD
PM me if needed
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
So pretty - I really like the coloring as well, especially how you did the hair! It looks just like a professional promo poster. ^_^
And 69K already, wow! I'm impressed. How long do you think the entire game will be?
And 69K already, wow! I'm impressed. How long do you think the entire game will be?
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
Wow, impressive!
Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
@WickedRaccoon : Thank you very much!
@Azariah : Thank you ^^ If you have any opinion on the GUI feel free to tell me<3
@michi 18 : Nop, it's a freeware for now.
@Tag- : Thank you! I placed the logo cutting it unintentionally in order not to cover the character.
Do you think it'll look better if I resize the logo to fit into the image? ^^;
@Arowana : Hey~ Yeah I'm still experimenting with my coloring style so it keep changing ><
Pretty sure it looks different from how I colored previously ><
I think the game play is worth 2-3 hrs per route now so probably 7-8 hours for the whole game per route?
Not very sure but that's my plan. :3
@crystalxelement : Thank you ^^
@Azariah : Thank you ^^ If you have any opinion on the GUI feel free to tell me<3
@michi 18 : Nop, it's a freeware for now.
@Tag- : Thank you! I placed the logo cutting it unintentionally in order not to cover the character.
Do you think it'll look better if I resize the logo to fit into the image? ^^;
@Arowana : Hey~ Yeah I'm still experimenting with my coloring style so it keep changing ><
Pretty sure it looks different from how I colored previously ><
I think the game play is worth 2-3 hrs per route now so probably 7-8 hours for the whole game per route?
Not very sure but that's my plan. :3
@crystalxelement : Thank you ^^
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
Yes! What do you mean for now? The full game is freeware?
Projects: (I hope you'll support them ) Wisdom Revivalhttp://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=16488 and Universal Hope (Uni-H)http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=16452.
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
Actually, my opinion in the GUI? It's great!!! The simplicity of the GUI makes it very user-friendly (Google taught me that)bunbun wrote:
@Azariah : Thank you ^^ If you have any opinion on the GUI feel free to tell me<3
But if you want, might I suggest for you to add a picture of the character every time the user opens a new menu!
For example if the user opens the "Preferences" section, a picture of Ten Lucia will be shown in the background so it would look a little lively! ;D
But then again, this is just a suggestion, please don't be forced on doing this suggestion, ok? I'll feel bad T_T
Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
Sorry for the late reply guys ^^;
@michi 18 : It will be free overall! I just thought I might ask for donation to get back some money I used to commission for this work ><
No worries about paying!
@Azariah : Hey! You gave the same suggestion as my friend!
I thought the GUI was too plain at first too so I modified it (which is the results now). I did try adding character at the background but it looked distracting to me.
I will leave it plain like how it is now. <:
Thanks for suggestion though!
@michi 18 : It will be free overall! I just thought I might ask for donation to get back some money I used to commission for this work ><
No worries about paying!
@Azariah : Hey! You gave the same suggestion as my friend!
I thought the GUI was too plain at first too so I modified it (which is the results now). I did try adding character at the background but it looked distracting to me.
I will leave it plain like how it is now. <:
Thanks for suggestion though!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
@bunbun: No problem! But yeah, the GUI looks better just like that! Waaahh! Looking forward to play this! I'll support you and your game all the way! Good luck! xD
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Nov11
@bunbun:Oh! THat's great! I like your games but I dont have the chance to play them because most of them are commercial.
Projects: (I hope you'll support them ) Wisdom Revivalhttp://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=16488 and Universal Hope (Uni-H)http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=16452.
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