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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#91 Post by Aquane »

Ten.. Taga.. *flashback*

Oh my god it.. is you~ :3 You made that adorably hilarious little game, they were animals.. Wow! Your artwork is amazing as always, improved of course as well.. a more serious game than the last, you weren't kidding. I love what you've done with Ten, beautiful design, outfits and all. Can't believe I haven't found this sooner.. -shrug-

Can't wait to play it :) I may have to do some fanart.. this version of Taga, with his old bear ears~

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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#92 Post by FatUnicornGames »

That GUI is great!! But, um... It kind of looks like it says Dolume twice.
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#93 Post by Panda_nui »

ahhh/// everytime i look at this, i can never get over how amazing the art is eee///////
the story also seems pretty cool too *q*

I'm really excited for this release haha///

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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#94 Post by MioSegami »

WOW THE ART IS BEAUTIFUL...IT LOOKS SOOO PROFESSIONAL(in myo opinion!) Is this commercial or will it be free? BECAUSE GOODNESS I'M INLOVE!
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#95 Post by bunbun »

Sorry for late reply guys *cough cough*

@Lumella : Thanks for your feedback! It helped a lot! ^^
I do have a dA http://bun-bunz.deviantart.com
I'm not too active there though ^^|||

@Aquane : Oh yes! I did make the game few years back then haha!
Please clear your mind and forget about the ooc-ness!!!
Thank you for your support! I'll try my best, and continue brushing up on my skills ><
ah and, fanarts is welcome! I'll be really happy to see them!

@FatUnicornGames : YOU'RE RIGHT! How careless I am!
I used a different font for the V and here is how it looks like.
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@Panda_nui : Thanks for your support! I'm glad you like the art ^^
I'll try my best!

@MioSegami : Thank you! I'm not a professional, long way to go but I'll try to improve my skill more!
This is a free game! I don't want it to be commercial as it'll be stressful, more over I want many to be able to play!
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#96 Post by ShadowBerry »

awww finally updates >////<

wow the menu looks awesome o.o
has an old vintage style~
love it <3
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#97 Post by Aseret »

SUPER excited for this game, it looks amazing :D
Your art is absolutely beautiful!
Not sure if you mentioned this, but how many chapters do you think there'll be in total?
From the previous posts, it seems like you'll be releasing this about the end of this year, as an estimate?
Really looking forward to this! :)

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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Dec20

#98 Post by FatUnicornGames »

That looks better! It is a much better V!
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Jan 25

#99 Post by bunbun »

@ShadowBerry : Thank you very much!

@Aseret : Thanks! I'll try my best ><
There'll be an estimation of 10 chapters or less depending on the character path.
I estimated the release date according to my work pace though it's not accurate ^^;

@FatUnicornGames : Yay! Thank you so much for your advice~

Update :
Sorry for being inactive recently.
I was kind of lazy to update with the mindset that I rather work on my project than to check the forum ^^;
My pace was slower at early January due to the holidays but I'm back to work on Waxwing with my stable pace.
Also some major change which might make you feel either happy or sad.

I've changed Shin's design.

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(another sketch drawn by my co-artist Synnimaru)
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Of course I updated the promotion art of Shin's new design too! ^^

As for writing, I'm almost done with chapter 6!
I'm lazy to count the words anymore...
But anyways, I set my aim and schedule every month, thus I'm pretty confident that chapter 6 can be done by Feb.
As for the actual release date, not yet. I still can't estimate how far the story will go although I've rounded the endings and plots.

Some thoughts about one of the applicable :
Recor, who I never really liked him because he's a flirt. It was actually hard to write about a character if I don't like them.
Thank god I came up with an excuse to make me feel better about him so he who was suppose to have only 1 ending will have 2-3 endings now.
I'm looking forward to the bad ending for it's cg...Ohohohoho...

Lastly, sprite test with the maid design!
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drawn and lineart by synnimaru, colored by me.

So see you in the next update!
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Jan 25

#100 Post by MioSegami »

Wah...wah...WOW! It's sooo cute! And shin is soooo cuutee~!!!! <33 I absolutely love the GUI and the girl! The progression seems great!
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Jan 25

#101 Post by TheOneTwo »

I-Is this.. Commercial? :D
Bish please, I'm fab.
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Jan 25

#102 Post by MioSegami »

TheOneTwo wrote:I-Is this.. Commercial? :D
Ahahaha! I asked the same thing too! But no it isn't commercial! YES FREE GAME!
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Jan 25

#103 Post by TheOneTwo »

:shock:

Really?

Wow! Just.. wow! The game is awesome and it's not for sale! :D Wee~
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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Jan 25

#104 Post by Blane Doyle »

I know I probably shouldn't be surprised given the fact I have seen other free games that look this good before, but I REALLY didn't believe this one was free when I took a look in here. The artwork is polished and overall spectacular, the GUI is unique and detailed, and honestly if this were sold commercially I wouldn't bat an eyelash because it honestly does look like it being made for a commercial market.

And I love the fact that it isn't. As I said, I have definitely seen games, here and elsewhere, that look "commercial grade" while they are going to be free and many of them could honestly hold up to a commercial market in my eyes after playing them. Many more don't look "commercial grade" by some people's standards and could STILL be sold commercially simply because they're made and written so well. The fact that it is being developed for free, for anyone to play, is wonderful and sort of breaks up the stereotype that "free means not as good as commercial", which is not true to me at all.

But to summarize: This is really pretty and you could easily make money off it but you are amazing but doing it for free anyway you wonderful human being.

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Re: Waxwing[otome, Fantasy, Story base] Jan 25

#105 Post by EchoLove »

Can't wait for this visual novel! The art is absolutely beautiful and looks like it's from a professional company. Definatly stalking this tread! xD

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