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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#31 Post by FatUnicornGames »

The art is really lovely! I am super looking forward to this. I'm holding out for a bachelor with glasses (I am a sad, sad woman).

Keep up the great work!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#32 Post by Geckos »

FatUnicornGames wrote: I'm holding out for a bachelor with glasses (I am a sad, sad woman).
Best quote.
It all looks very clean and nice so far :) Keep it up!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#33 Post by Nellie »

I like the new GUI =D

Really lovely colouring style! Keep it up... I'm stalking =3
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#34 Post by eternalwishess »

Everything looks really nice, especially the drawings. I'm so looking forward to this. :3 Do you have a release date for this yet? 0:
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#35 Post by bunbun »

@jeje : You're so sweet *sniff*
I'm really happy to hear your support and I'm pretty sure I'll need alot of help.
Suggestion and opinions would be the best too!

@CuppieKeyk : Oh noononononono please don't check this thread too often.
I doubt I'll update that frequent once I'm done with the character design.
Please don't have too high hope *sob*
I'm glad you like my thread though *hugs*

@FatUnicornGames : thank you!
I'm glad you suggested glasses as I notice none of my character wears it.
It made me laughed so much when I tried to force glasses on the released character, they don't match at all.
However, I'll be sure to have a bachelor with glasses!
PS : He has silver long hair ;;;

@Geckos : Yes another glasses fan? I'll take note of it. *points at my reply to FatUnicornGames*
I hope I won't disappointing you all though ;_;

@Nellie : Thank you for always supporting my thread. Q_Q
I'll try my best <-very inexperience at making GUIs ugh...

@eternalwishess : thanks for your support ♥
I'll try my best!
About the release date, it's not confirm yet.
As you can see I'm not even done with any sprite.
I'm still at the stage of drafting character design and writing story.
The fastest release date would be 2013 April, latest will be end of 2013 depending how much time I have.

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#36 Post by Onionchan »

I love fantasy otome games! You don't get to see too many of them nowadays, since most are high-school based ones haha ^_^" The storyline sounds very interesting, but I do have to say I was a little confused when I first read the summary. It sounded rather vague, and it was on my third reading that I finally got the overall gist of it.

Your art is gorgeous (even though they're only the drafts...) I particularly like the MC and Cyrus so far. Is he a capture-able character, or am I mistaken? D: Please tell me he is! I noticed that for the character's legs/shoes some of them seemed a little off/not in proportion. Other than that, then I'll definitely be following updates on this game. You're doing a great job, especially for your first VN! :D

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#37 Post by bunbun »

@Onionchan : Thanks for your feedback!
I'm very bad at making summaries, I'll look back into it and see how I can make it easier to understand.^^
sorry for confusing you OTL
For your question, sadly Cyrus isn't captureable, he flies as he want, he has all the freedom and move without my permission

For my art, would you tell me which character's anatomy is wrong? (except rek as I'm going to redraw him)
My art aren't the best and I would change them until they look better.^^
art critique is very important to me so feel free to throw them at me with good advice on how to fix them!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#38 Post by 15385bic »

I WANT YOUR GUI ARTIST *Q*

art is good too >/////////<!
ten is adorable! and ilove their outfits ;D
so looking forward to this

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#39 Post by spiritsongtress »

So amazing. The Artwork and sketches are gorgeous. Keep it up we need more GxB and GXG games out there!

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#40 Post by ngareci »

Omg, I'm totally love the art!!
The characters are interesting, If I have to choose one of the obtainable guy above, I will choose Rek. But it will be great if you add deeper information for each one.. :D
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#41 Post by ririruetoo »

Art work is so pretty...:D
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#42 Post by KittyKatStar »

bunbun wrote: However, I'll be sure to have a bachelor with glasses!
*thumbs up* Sounds awesome.

I love the character designs (pretty clothes) and the GUI! It's very lovely, especially Rek's design.
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#43 Post by VenusEclipse »

I love the artwork. I didn't notice this WIP until I clicked on active topics, and saw a topic that looked like "Waxing" [otome]. I was thinking it's a parody that has to do with waxing....

I love your designs. Lots of thought in those outfits. =)

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#44 Post by FatUnicornGames »

bunbun wrote: @FatUnicornGames : thank you!
I'm glad you suggested glasses as I notice none of my character wears it.
It made me laughed so much when I tried to force glasses on the released character, they don't match at all.
However, I'll be sure to have a bachelor with glasses!
PS : He has silver long hair ;;;
Then I have done my job. ::walks slowly into the sunset::
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Sept 13

#45 Post by bunbun »

@15385bic : Ah, I'm the GUI artist, basically doing all the design solo ^^;
thank you for looking forward to this, it means alot \o/

@spiritsongtress : Thank you! I'll be sure to higher the quality of the sprites.
I thought there's a lot of GXB already but I'll try my best to make it interesting ^^

@ngareci : Thanks for you suggestion. I've updated the character info yet keep it tight so I'll not spoil the story. About Rek, his clothes design will be changed ><

@ririruetoo : Thank you! (^3^)/~♥

@KittyKatStar : Thanks! I'll work hard and think for better design for other characters.
Unfortunately for Rek, his clothes will be changed OTL

@VenusEclipse : Omg you made me laugh so hard when you said "waxing"
I know it's such a misleading and random game title I have.
Thanks for commenting, it's really an honor! (I've played your game frozen essence and it's amazing *Q*)

@FatUnicornGames : Yeap! I'm glad you did. Suggestions and opinion really means a lot!Thank you very much ^^

Update Sept13 - Fixed synopsis and character description, updated Ten's sleep wear.
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I won't post up character outfits on the topic post.
I will be posting them on the WIP blog (tumblr) and only reply and announce updates later on here to avoid spamming.
If anyone wants faster updates for art you can check out the WIP blog.

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