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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy]

#16 Post by lein »

This is your first work and yet IT'S AWESOME! another otome VN that is worth to wait...

Looking forward for your next updates :D
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Now also opening commission! *shameless promotion mode on


I wish I could start off my own VN thread ASAP ._.

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#17 Post by ShadowBerry »

I really like the story and the characters look marvelous!
I saw that not all guys will have a 100% romantic ending?
So a 'good' ending with one (or more) of the guys will only be friendship?
Mh, a shame when I llok at all the guys xD

But I keep an eye on this.
It just sounds to interesting to me.
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy]

#18 Post by bunbun »

@nottiebutt :thank you ^^ I'll try my best

@Nellie : Thanks! You have really nice game WIP too *jealous*

@Pecora Z : No problem! I don't have confident with advertising nor thought of making one.
It seems stressful to feed up customer's needs ^^;
I'm not sure what you mean Ten is generic yet not.
Could you mean her storyline is generic but her looks isn't? (I've seen alot of pink long hair girl everywhere *cough cough* )
No worries though the storyline won't be focus on what is stated here!
And there's a high chance I would need beta-testers.
I'll post it up when it's time! Thank you <3

@lein : Thank you for your support
I'll work hard not to disappoint you ;_;
and of course! With frequent updates!

@ShadowBerry : thank you for taking interest in the chars *tear*
and yeap, the game is more story base otome game, focusing on the story and character background rather than 100% romance
some relationships are against my moral thus I made them friendship...
well anyways, please look forward for the game, I won't spoil what isn't necessary ^^
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy]

#19 Post by ShadowBerry »

haha you mean the relationship between her and her older brother?
Yeah I was quite curious how you want to do it when I saw him in the "obtainable guys"-list xD
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#20 Post by Pecora Z »

bunbun wrote:
@Pecora Z : No problem! I don't have confident with advertising nor thought of making one.
It seems stressful to feed up customer's needs ^^;
I'm not sure what you mean Ten is generic yet not.
Could you mean her storyline is generic but her looks isn't? (I've seen alot of pink long hair girl everywhere *cough cough* )
No worries though the storyline won't be focus on what is stated here!
And there's a high chance I would need beta-testers.
I'll post it up when it's time! Thank you <3
What I meant was that she seems like a generic princess- one that doesn't enjoy being princess, wants freedom, etc. I don't know if it's just me, but if I was a princess, I think I would enjoy being a princess and milk it for all it's worth xD But then again, a very good writer can turn even that cliche into something worth reading. I have no doubt you'll be able to make it work, and I was hesitant to say she has Rebellious Princess Syndrome because you didn't exactly say she wanted/did rebel, and because you gave a short description. But her look is very unique, and so is your storyline (:

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy]

#21 Post by Rem-chan »

*O* The art and the menu looks amazing *O*

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#22 Post by bunbun »

Aug 20 - Updated Ten Lucia
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sorry had been in bad health and hiatus for a week ^^;
getting back to work slowly

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@ShadowBerry : I have no problem with incest, I'll let you guess for now ^^

@Pecora Z : Ah I see! I thought so too, my editor did tell me she's like princess jasmine from disney
I notice alot of princess doesn't like being in the castle
I won't spoil anything for now, but I'll try my best to put up good reason of why she doesn't like her life in castle;;;

@Rem-chan : Thank you very much!<3
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 20

#23 Post by Pandora »

The protagonist's character design is great! I really like the colour scheme, and how delicate and light the colouring is. I'm looking forward to this. n_n
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 20

#24 Post by CuppieKeyk »

Wow, It's Amazing ! :shock:
MY gosh ! I'm gonna subscribe to this thread, keep an eye and look forward to it XD.
I really like Fantasy/Otome game <3 ! Make's me more inspired =D
Keep going ! =D Don't overwork yourself. It's hard D:<

*Those arts are really good. Makes my nose bleed xDDD.
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 20

#25 Post by ixWishing »

Oh gosh, your sprites look GORGEOUS!
And the storyplot is a bit vague, but interesting enough!
I'm excited for this! :') <3
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 20

#26 Post by Nellie »

*faints*

I really love your Lucia designs. The colourings are so ... gorgeous too! I want more Lucia~ XD
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 20

#27 Post by bunbun »

@ Pandora : thank you <3
I will try my best!

@CuppieKeyk : Uh-ah. OTL
Thanks for your support. Although there's still a long way to go, I hope I'll be able to keep you...inspired? I'm really honored if I would be able to.
Also not to overwork yet keep my project schedule a balance <3

@ixWishing : Thank you! *tear*
Yes the summary doesn't give much detail. I struggled a lot while trying to think of how to write it yet not reveal any spoilers.
For now, it'll be like this until there'll be more updates. ;_;

@Nellie : welcome back? XD
Thank you for liking Ten! I'm glad there's people liking her;;;
I'm still thinking of how many design I should give her, so stay tune for more updates of her clothes!
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 20

#28 Post by bunbun »

more updates

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Taga
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Also I changed the frame for text box after testing how it looks like while putting Ten's face on it.
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Well...she looked trapped if I used the older frame thus I remade a new one ^^;

current word count -35k
that's all for now!(◕‿◕❀)
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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 31

#29 Post by jeje »

Le me in awe...





*GASP*

I suffocated from lack of air just now, looking at your drawing.

I hope I could have your skill... Bunbun-sama... *O* let me adore you!!
You know that many people will be looking up for this! Let us know if you need anything!!
If you're looking for support, you already have it! A lot of it!!
Keep on being awesome!!

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Re: Waxwing[otome GXB, Fantasy] Aug 20

#30 Post by CuppieKeyk »

bunbun wrote:more updates

Cyrus
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Taga
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Also I changed the frame for text box after testing how it looks like while putting Ten's face on it.
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Well...she looked trapped if I used the older frame thus I remade a new one ^^;

current word count -35k
that's all for now!(◕‿◕❀)
Ohh my gawd, The heck ! I really love those guys o3o, They're soo hawwt !
Keep up the good wooorkk ! Waah, I'm addicted looking to his thread everyday XD.
Really really amazing ! =DD
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