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Hinokami no Tsubasa[STOP TILL 2014]

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:22 pm
by Daistarir
Otome Games : WIP : Hinokami no tsubasa


Chiaki Hamano is a normal students. She lives her normal life every day .
One day, She go out with her friend at the arcade ,Chiaki pick up a stuffed red fox at folding machine call " Hinokami " . After that , when she go home , she throw the stuffed fox on her bed . Suddenly, the stuffed fox changing to a Fox-Spirit . He's call her "Master" . And introducing that his name was Kouhei , he is her guardian and she is Hinokami- Fire Goddess . Chiaki wasn't believe at first but the next day , Chiaki got attacked by a lot of Monster and Kouhei come to rescue her . At that time , She agreed to be the Hinokami and make a contact with him with a kiss.
Sorry, because I am an air-headed. I am not good at English


Okay , I will think about character first~
  • 1. First of all is our (un)lovely MC.
    Chiaki Hamano ( Name Changeble )
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    Age :17
    Secret: Fire Goddess
    Personality :Cool Type( I mean icy-cool)
    Chiaki is a rock-lover. She is a punk girl with a emo face. She likes indoor activity and listening to rock-music. She hate people who talk a lot except her brother and best friend. Chiaki is a strong girl , she can jump down from the 2nd without a scratch.

    Romanceable Characters
    2. Ren Ichinose
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    -Age : 17
    -Secret: ???
    -Personality: Lonely Type
    Ren is a mordern tsundere . He lives in a rich family . His father is a mysterious men , and his mother die when he was six . He usually get lonely , and sad . He doesn't talk much with anybody in school . He usually tease the MC each time he saw her .

    4. Hayasaki Suzuya
    Age :17
    Personality : Flirtarious Type.
    Secret :???
    Hayasaki is a modern Casanova . He dates almost every girls in school. He flirt everyone ( even Yukio! Just kidding!xD).He is the MC's childhood friend. He likes the Chiaki ever since they were kid.


    5. Kouhei
    -Age : What ??? You really want to know
    -Personality : Innocent Type
    -Secret: ???
    Kouhei is a fox-spirit . He was live in a fox-plushies . Chiaki was picked him up at the claw machine and bring him home . After that , he become her guardian . He's very stupid , no I meant it . He hasn't come out of thĂȘ plushies a hundred year so he doesn't know almost anything in this world


    6.Izumi Yukio
    Age :15
    Personality: Energetic Type
    Secret:???
    He's a cute,youthful boy in ... girl clothes. He has a face of a cute , adoreble girl . Blue sparkle eyes , blonde long hair make the MC easily mistaken him with a girl from their first met . He enjoys girl clothes and be pretty but if somebody call him gay or something like that he will man up and beat them up.


    Non-romanceable Characters
    1. Hirukiko Minami
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    Age:17
    Personality: Cheerful, Dreamy.
    MC's BFF. She likes to read romantic novel and watch Korean movie. She always dreaming about "Romantic-love-story".

You can watching the progess here.
HERE!!!

PROGESS~~~~

Script: 30%
Story: 15%
Music : 20%
Artwork : 30%
CG : 10%
Design Graphic:0%

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Arts by: Hamstar,MrTViolet
Music : Daiquiri
Story: Hamstar, Daiquiri
Coding : Daiquiri.

Features
- Chibi CG!!!! Well...Almost
- There are more than six obtainable boys and three girls including the protagonist, Chiaki
- 23 Endings ( 3 Ending Each Boys: Special Endings, Good Ending , Bad Ending(bad ending is fun!!) And 2 Other Ending : Harem Ending, and Secret Ending)
- Character outfit, art by Hamstar
- Extra Suprise Secret Ending
Notes : Feel free to help, contact us at : daistarir@gmail.com

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 11:36 am
by erinism
I will definitely keep an eye on this.

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 4:34 pm
by Rin
Harem endingggggg

Ah... eheehee, good luck for this ^^ I'm looking forward to see how do the chars look *w*

Just a minor thing. If you don't mind, would you please change the yellow texts to another color? ^~^ Since its brightness kinda hurts my eyes and I have to Ctrl A to read those texts (Or its just my monitor?) As said, not a big thing but yea, just saying ^^ If its just because of my monitor then never mind xDDDD

Again, good luck to your team~

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 3:44 pm
by ShadowBerry
I like this....sounds good and reminds me of an anime I watched before xD

LOOOOL I knew it!
You even use the name TOMOE for the Fox!!!
I knew you got the idea from that manga
Uhhh I love that manga!!

But why didn't you invole Kurama too? He is awesome! xDDD

Oh but I have to tell you something, before you release the Game or even a demo, let a native english Proofreader look over your work.
I saw quite some mistakes in your english language.
And I am saying this because I am just like you (just in a german version)
My english is very bad sometimes, good to have a proofreader in those times.

Oh and....
You can watching the progess here.
HERE!!!
That website would be awesome but I am german and can't read vietnamese...

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:32 am
by Daistarir
ShadowBerry wrote:I like this....sounds good and reminds me of an anime I watched before xD

LOOOOL I knew it!
You even use the name TOMOE for the Fox!!!
I knew you got the idea from that manga
Uhhh I love that manga!!

But why didn't you invole Kurama too? He is awesome! xDDD

Oh but I have to tell you something, before you release the Game or even a demo, let a native english Proofreader look over your work.
I saw quite some mistakes in your english language.
And I am saying this because I am just like you (just in a german version)
My english is very bad sometimes, good to have a proofreader in those times.

Oh and....
You can watching the progess here.
HERE!!!
That website would be awesome but I am german and can't read vietnamese...
Kamisama Kiss you say?
Yes ~~ I like the surname Tomoe .
It's from Tomoe Yoh.
I change some infor but no pic yet. ( Poor me xDD!)

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:41 am
by miaverana
Great! Another Vietnamese >u<. I'll keep an eye on this. Good luck~

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:48 am
by Daistarir
miaverana wrote:Great! Another Vietnamese >u<. I'll keep an eye on this. Good luck~
Hello!~ I like your "Amy's Super Life" ideas!!!

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:53 am
by miaverana
Daistarir wrote:
miaverana wrote:Great! Another Vietnamese >u<. I'll keep an eye on this. Good luck~
Hello!~ I like your "Amy's Super Life" ideas!!!
Thank you!!! >u< I like your idea for Sprited Love, too. (Did Kamisama Hajimemashita inspire you? :3)

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:06 pm
by ngareci
Romance between the various type of creature (Goddess, spirit, human) is a strong interesting point here. I can imagine some handsome reverse harem (slurp) with the Goddess as the center. :D
The title Spirited love reminds me of an otome game titled spirited heart anyway..

Good luck on your progress! I'll keep my eye on this~!

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:22 pm
by Daistarir
miaverana wrote:
Daistarir wrote:
miaverana wrote:Great! Another Vietnamese >u<. I'll keep an eye on this. Good luck~
Hello!~ I like your "Amy's Super Life" ideas!!!
Thank you!!! >u< I like your idea for Sprited Love, too. (Did Kamisama Hajimemashita inspire you? :3)
miaverana wrote: Not much , because I pretty much hate the Kamisama Hajimemashita . I only like Tomoe . He's kinda cute.
But I'm not going draw Tomoe like Tomoe .
I've thought about changing the name to Tomoe . How about Kunihiko or Shinakio or Toshihiro or Yukio or Yasahiro or Kouhei ????

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:45 pm
by miaverana
But I'm not going draw Tomoe like Tomoe .
Of course ^^".
I've thought about changing the name to Tomoe . How about Kunihiko or Shinakio or Toshihiro or Yukio or Yasahiro or Kouhei ????
If you ask me, I like Yukio :3.

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:58 pm
by ShadowBerry
Nooo Yukio sounds girly...
I like Kouhei.

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 9:21 am
by Daistarir
miaverana wrote:
But I'm not going draw Tomoe like Tomoe .
Of course ^^".
I've thought about changing the name to Tomoe . How about Kunihiko or Shinakio or Toshihiro or Yukio or Yasahiro or Kouhei ????
If you ask me, I like Yukio :3.
ShadowBerry wrote:Nooo Yukio sounds girly...
I like Kouhei.
I like both . So hard to choose :-(.

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:46 am
by ShadowBerry
then just add a new character and name him Yukio..? xD

Re: Spirited Love[GxB][Mystery,Romance,School Life,Fantasy]

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:56 am
by Daistarir
ShadowBerry wrote:then just add a new character and name him Yukio..? xD

A girlish boy !!! Just like Haruhi in (P)lanet ! xDD . And, I like Airi in your Yakuza blossom.