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Just a demo [Horror] (spanish)

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 1:43 pm
by KebecMaslow
There's a demo of "Here's Evil" and as you can see is in spanish, so I hope It doesn't get banned XD

http://www.mediafire.com/?b2arhq1b9wkhniv

Here's Evil is a kinetic novel (like "when they cry") but there is a problem to make it as complete as I want: a gallery. I tried to follow the instructions in the renpy's homepage but I couldn't do it, so if there's someone who can say me how to do it I will be very grateful.

Project status 15% completed:
-Add the character sprites.
-Add the CG's.
-Add the SFX's.
-Complete the story.
-Add the credits.
-And finally, make the gallery.

Greetings.

Re: Just a demo [Horror] (spanish)

Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2012 1:00 am
by Kuroneko_rg
It's been too long since the last time I've read something written in Spanish. I must say, your narration is remarkable.
The way you jump from stage to stage is an interesting choice.
The plot is very catching, and made me eager to see what's next.
You should really consider translating it to English, that way you might get some more significant feedback.

Re: Just a demo [Horror] (spanish)

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 11:36 am
by KebecMaslow
Kuroneko_rg wrote:It's been too long since the last time I've read something written in Spanish. I must say, your narration is remarkable.
The way you jump from stage to stage is an interesting choice.
The plot is very catching, and made me eager to see what's next.
You should really consider translating it to English, that way you might get some more significant feedback.
Well, that will be difficult. I'm not that good with english (yet), making small posts is easy, but translating the entire vn will take a time. Even so, I will make an english version in the future.

Anyway, thank you so much for your comment.

Re: Just a demo [Horror] (spanish)

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 2:55 pm
by KebecMaslow
There are some character designs I did with a generator.