Ooh, I remember this!!
Hard to believe that it's been over a year for this project..
I didn't know you had a demo for this till now. Dl-ed and played it today
while taking a break from studying.
Where do I begin?
Art/Graphics: I like the refreshing style of your art. It's artsy, it's quirky - and it totally suits your cast of characters. Both in terms of personality, and outright looks. The GUI, the menus - it's there, it's in-your-face, and it's
interesting. Even when looking at the main menu itself, it got me a tad more curious about how the game was gonna go. I love the CGs, by the way.
Plot/Story/Writing: Really, really, nicely done. I love the mixture of angst, drama, comedy and everything. The interactions between the characters were fantastic, some simple yet complicated. The dialogue itself was an amazing melting pot of diversity - from snarky to the sarcastic, the witty to the comedic quips, the drama to the bluntness of them of all. And on the other hand, you have the stark reality of the situation in nicely done descriptions. In some scenes, I know what's going to happen. In others, I don't. Either way, you handle the building of the suspense really well. Kudos.
Music/Sounds: You sure know how to pick'em accordingly. Not too much, not too little. The choices for the scenes were just right, and enhanced the game.
Characters: Needless to say, I love how you handled the cast of characters. Not only are they diverse, they have their own roles to play and their personalities... There's a lot more to them that I don't know and I really want to play to full game to find out what.
I totally ship Alice and Cath together, by the way.

But gah, that scene. That scene when Cath
took a bullet for her - my feels. And that moment Alice hugged Cath - awwww. I really like the development of their understanding.
Yes, the two of them totally hate each other. Right. And that's not even mentioning all those previous times. And conversations. Yep.
As for Linus and the others, so much win right there. Especially Mak and Linus. Pfft. Daemon's epic luck with games, Acer's hyperness, Steven's thing with clothes.... comedy gold xD I was SO lucky I wasn't drinking anything when I was playing through that part

Overall, I love everything about the game. It's very original and unique. I hope that this will be eventually finished. All the best and take care!
