Era of Monsters [GxB][Fantasy, Romance, Comedy][Demo]

[ShippoK]

Music - ...ಠ_ಠ (I'm hopeless here. But I know sites with free-music, so I'll manage to overcome this problem)

http://www.jamendo.com/en

You'll thank me later.

[lilyrose]

LOLS silent stalker of this game finally posts something!!!!!!
lols I love, love, love the art. Very nice.
The story itself seems very intertaining and I love the idea of a strong will heroine
Nothing is iriitating it looks fantasitc
Two games sounds really good if your putting erotic scenes (though a lot of people probably don't care much as long as you give them forwarning.)
And your english isn't bad, I actually thought english was your first language O.o (a lot of people I know who have english as a first language (including myself) suck at spelling and grammer :3)

The backgrounds look pretty amazing. But I have to agree, they are not the focal point so don't stress to much over them.
and............25 CGS FOR A DEMO?!?!?!??!?!?! ...hey the more the merrier just try not to overwork yourself, (but I'm not complaining, hey the more the merrier!!!!!!!) lols
as for music, waiting until after the demo is done would probably be good. A lot of people who play would probably want to help with that.

(after thought: love the troll maids!!!! so adorable~ And so far my favorite guy would probably be Theo (I hope i got his name right, I'm horrable with them :3 but who doesn't like a sexy slave~ :3)

anyways good luck and I will be waiting (anxiously) for both the demo and the final release!!!!!!!!

EDIT: longest post i did for someones work EVER :3

[Merula O]

ShippoK,
Wow, it's really interesting! Thank you!

lilyrose,
Silent stalker posted – yay! Thank you for your comment! Nice feedbacks always make me want to work at the project a bit more.

And your english isn't bad, I actually thought english was your first language O.o (a lot of people I know who have english as a first language (including myself) suck at spelling and grammer :3)

Lol, thanks. I always thought (and still think) that my English is barely understandable and awkward. I was kind of forced to post the thread about my project on the forum because I as like “Meh, they won`t understand me and nobody will be interested anyway…” ha ha… maybe, I think too much.
My university is killing me, not games and hobbies. And efforts I put into the project are nothing in comparison with studies. I`m perfectly OK and have lots of fun (first accidentally wrote ‘have lots of fu-u’, lol. Correct too)
I love my maids too! Sadly, funny characters don’t have much screen-time… I want more scenes with Neyris` grandmother and grandfather >.< (they appear in two-three boys` routes)

Theo… OK!

[Aines445]

I might be late for the party, but I've been stalking this for a while, so I might as well:

Are you interested in playing then the game will be completed?
Yes. Yes. Yes. I can't answer in a way that won't make it awkward! x.x
Is a dominant witch acceptable as a protagonist for you? Just want to see opinions and maybe advices what I have to be careful with. Nobody loves a complete bitch, I know…
FUCK YEAH!!!!! Absolutely!
Is characters design OK?
Yeah, I think it matches everyone's personalities enough.
Is here something irritating you?
Not really, I guess I'll find out from playing the game when it'll be finished (Because it will be finished *wink* XD).
Urm… initially I wanted to make a decent 18+ game. But the adult part of the forum is so much unpopular… and dead. What do you think? Is porny part distract you from a story? I`m focusing on the plot, the characters and romance now. I`m OK anyway either some staff like this will be in game or not.
You could always make a separate version that has that content. I'm not so fond of that, but there are other people that would enjoy a 18+ game, so I think the best option would be a separate version!

I'm looking forward to this! ^-^

[Merula O]

Aines445,
I`m so sorry for my super-late answer! Had some troubles in RL, sorry. Thank you for your following, and – nope, it`s never late to join the party!
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Hi again! Just wanted to say that I`m here again, still full of enthusiasm. And as always, there is some visual content. Because it`s fun.

[ngareci]

Awww, the artwork is so coool!
I'm still stalking this, and I'm glad this game is still on fire!

[Merula O]

Thank you, ngareci!
I already posted child Till somewhere here, and now I can show loli little Neyris. I`m guilty of loving flashbacks.

[nancie]

Aw so cute, I love flashbacks too. Can't wait for the demo!

[Merula O]

nancie, thank you!

About the progress: I plan to realize demo soon (before the 16th of June, if nothing happens). I have already made everything I wanted to make, and now game is being tested.
And one of side characters:

[lilyrose]

He's just a side character O.o.................T.T so sad XD Oh, and yay!!!! Can't believe the demo will be released so soon!!!!! I can't wait

[Didules]

Fantasy? Romance? Witch and demons? And monsters? It looks great!!
Are you interested in playing then the game will be completed?
Yes, definitely!
Is a dominant witch acceptable as a protagonist for you?
A strong-willed protagonist is more interesting than a hesitating girl
Is characters design OK?
Yes, they are great! I really like Malik and Riki!!
Is here something irritating you?
Yes: you're too talented for your own sake (just joking)
Everything is alright, I hope to see more about this game
Good luck!

[xrominax]

am just another stalker
omg! this game looks so fun
and i love the art and guys *O*
cant wait!! >,<

[inhalance]

What an interesting game! I'm excited to see the full product I love Neyris' eyes too ^^

[Ran08]

Ooooooh, everything looks so amazing! :3

Are you interested in playing then the game will be completed?
Yep. The story is interesting, so I'd love to play it once it's finished. ^^

Is a dominant witch acceptable as a protagonist for you?
Haha, sure, not many people would love a complete biii, but it sure would be fun to see a protagonist that's not the usual goody-two shoes. So... I think Neyris is very acceptable. ^^ Personally, I feel like I'm looking at Cinderella's story through the eyes of her stepmother.

Is characters design OK?
Yup! Oh, I love 'em. Especially Malik and Theo. So handsome. ^^ Hmm, although, they do look too young for Neyris. I guess. Maybe. That's just my personal opinion though.

Is here something irritating you?
Nope. Haha. There really isn't anything that irritates me.

Hmm, don't worry! You English is not disgusting. English isn't my first language either, so I totally understand. Although... you did make a few errors that could be easily corrected anyway, so it's alright. Besides, whether or not English is your native tongue, it's still recommended to get a proofreader to check for errors. Writers tend to overlook their own mistakes you know. ^^

P.S. I don't quite understand the synopsis though. Umm, but that's entirely my fault, and not yours. ^^ I guess I'm just slow in thinking today. Hmm... umm, so, it's like the girl took her for hostage or something? Haha, and she was put under a spell? And then... umm, why did she decide to have boys? (Like, when did the romance come into the story?)

Haha, umm, sorry for all the questions. ^_^'

[Merula O]

Still in the testing stage, no demo yet. Sorry.

Lilyrose,
Trollface.jpg I understand your feelings, I really do! Guys with blond hair are my type... But he was created for a different purpose. Sorry.
Didules, thank you!

Yes: you're too talented for your own sake (just joking)

Oh, you (*//0//*)… Well, almost everyone can become better at something if a person works hard. I think. When I first understood that I want to make a VN, I started meditating at ren`py codes and develop my skills. It was about… three years ago?.. So I just have some experience, even though I`m just some unknown newbie for everyone here, ahahaha… Too shy to interfere other discussion on the forum.
Xrominax, thank you!
Inhalance, thank you, yes, she has got cute eyes! Maybe she looks like that just because violet is my favorite color?.. Hmm…
Ran08,
Thank you for the comment!

Personally, I feel like I'm looking at Cinderella's story through the eyes of her stepmother.

Oh, is that so? And I thought about witches all that time, lol. Anyways, it`s fine. Neyris has become a little too cheerful for a “villainous protagonist”, I hope people won`t be too disappointed.

…Especially Malik and Theo. So handsome. ^^ Hmm, although, they do look too young for Neyris. I guess. Maybe. That's just my personal opinion though.

No-no, you`re right! If you think so, I draw them correctly, because they are both younger than her. Not so much, and not enough to reach “shota level”, but still. Hey, Neyris is not so old! I think she looks older because she uses a lot of make-up? It happens. I posted somethere here her with other hair-style and without make-up...

...it's still recommended to get a proofreader to check for errors.

Oh, I`m already working with Anomandaris, who magically turns my miserable writing into understandable text. So please, don’t think that I`ll allow innocent people to go through the torture of reading my original barely understandable text, lol.

I don't quite understand the synopsis though. Umm, but that's entirely my fault, and not yours. ^^ I guess I'm just slow in thinking today. Hmm... umm, so, it's like the girl took her for hostage or something? Haha, and she was put under a spell? And then... umm, why did she decide to have boys? (Like, when did the romance come into the story?)

If you didn’t understand, it`s only my fault. I`m making something, I want people to get interested, so it`s only my responsibility to make a good first impression. I failed, lol. Anyways, I should answer your questions (thank you very much for asking!). Yes, white-mage girl Annett put the MC under a spell. Now she (Annett) can block her (Neyris`) using of magic. And there are some other methods of control (electroshock). About boys. Neyris has never lived next to an attractive boy (except for Kuon, but he is her bro…) – only ugly monsters and ogres were around. So she has never dated a guy before. What happened? Annett trolls teases her because of that --> Neyris gets butthurt a complex (‘couse witch, 300<years old) --> ??? --> Profit for us She wants to change situation and her idea goes wild, so now she wants to get a harem (she doesn’t, actually, but she thinks it`s a nice idea).
It was a long message. If I failed with the explanation again, feel free to ask . I`ll do my best answering any questions.