Hello
Just tried out this demo and woah! I really liked it !!
1) The story is interesting, the world is wide with a vast variety of beeings and that's terribly exiting !!!!
2) The protagonist : She's strong but yet a bit naive, cute and vulnerable. It's so sweet :3
3) Males :
3.1) Drake : At first I wasn't interested at all in this one. Too nice for his own good, but it might feel refreshing to have a prince on white horse to take care of her.
So why not trying this one out. No! The last picture released on the forum didn't help to have a second thought about him ...
NB : The red string, on his shirt, seems strange. It just feels misplaced, as if it's something which isn't part of his clothes.
3.2) Malik : Not interested in this one right now. way too timid. But if he can be somewhat strong or "heroic" or else when he needs to be, it can be something worth trying.
(even more if we can see his eyes)
3.3) Theo : Interesting, a proud mecha with no interest in magic in a magician world, just wanna know the story behing it. And yeah THIS scene is just awesome, way to cute this little slave!
3.4) Riki : Alien! Something strange, cute, vulnerable and dangerous. A strange mix :3
NB : The way he hold his hand on his scraf while tilting his head doesn't feel natural
3.5) Freynir : I'm hesitant about this one. He really is appealing but he's way too cold with Ney. I really hope he could be more than civil to her.
If not I don't see a reason for her to try to get close to him. Really looking forward to try his path to see how you managed it!
3.6) Kuon : Indeed interesting. Looking for his path and how this strict disciplined man can make rooms for a woman which is "unnecessary" thing
NB : his eyepatch too big and plain, maybe some seam would had the missing thing ^^
3.7) Till : So sweet and sarcastic... :3
3.8 ) ??? : Mysterious indeed, I have great expectation for this guy
4) Art : I liked it and especially the eyes
5) Music : not really listening sowwy :$
5) More :
Maybe you could implement the drawing of Ney's grand parents when she talks about them, it's a good one, so too bad if it's not used
I'm really eager to play this game, even if it's not finished. So curious about some of those guys !!!! <3
Wanna play, Wanna play, Wanna play, Wanna play, Wanna play
Thank you for your hard work :3