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Six Rules (Heian Japan|Children) COMPLETE!

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:19 am
by Coren
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STORY
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Hung on a piece on thread in the foyer, a bamboo scroll read:

Rules
1) You must not let any strangers into the house. Preferably not even the forest where we reside in.
2) If you spot any strangers loitering around the property, alert us immediately.
3) You may converse with strangers as a gesture of friendliness, but never tell them where the house is located. We are hiding for safety, after all.
4) Don't accept things from trespassers. Don't give things to trespassers, either.
5) Never, I repeat, never talk to those of the Taira family.
6) Got it? Don't trust the Taira Clan.


Minamoto no Ryouji, a 12th-century Japanese boy of the Minamoto clan read those rules, and knew them all by heart. Never in his life would he even dream of breaking even one of them. That is, until that one day he met a girl named Yuki in the heart of the winter fields.

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Minamoto no Ryouji
源 良時

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Yuki

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This is going to be a relatively short game, based on a story I've written two years ago. That manuscript was around 5,000 words in length, and it shouldn't change much here except that I may add an extra epilogue that explains a few things. I'd do this for NaNoReNo, but I've already completed RE: Prince of Nigeria in February and March is not going to be a very pleasant month for me, so I'll just take this game as it goes. :)

Progress:
Story: 100%
Writing: 100%
Art: 100%
Music: 100%
Programming: 60%

Development:
Story, Writing, Programming: Kirroha
Artwork: chocobikies
Music: marc

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:50 am
by Kato
The plots of your stories are always so cool! Haha. Looking forward to seeing this one :p

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 2:52 pm
by WickedRaccoon
How is it possible that whatever you write sounds so cool?
But yeah,this triggers my curiosity,so I'm gonna be stalking this...
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I’m watching you closely…

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:11 pm
by azureXtwilight
Awesome! Can't wait for it! I've read this story you wrote and I'm interested to see how it turns out with music and images. :)

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 7:57 am
by Coren
Thanks, guys! :'D I've sort of fallen in love with making smaller VNs lately...

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 9:09 am
by 15385bic
hein japan? - so we get to see cute little kids in like kimono/yukata type garmets? *q*

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 7:45 pm
by Coren
Yep. :) I'm still searching for an artist, but if I can't find one I may do it myself.

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2013 8:47 pm
by Coren
Thank you, bic, for being so awesome! :) Here's the sprite of the main character, Minamoto no Ryouji:
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Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 5:13 pm
by Arowana
This sounds like the perfect concept for a short story, and bic's character art is simply gorgeous! I don't usually play KN, but I'm really looking forward to this one. :D Best of luck with everything.

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:23 am
by Coren
I'm glad you're interested in it. :) Of course, bic never fails to prove herself - here's the sprite of the other main character, Yuki:
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Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:55 am
by azureXtwilight
SO AMAZINGLY FREAKING CUTE HNNNGH.

I am not going to say anything but it's just too cute for...for... never mind I'm going to refrain myself from spoiling.
Awesome!

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 6:43 pm
by 15385bic
}@azureXtwilight
I totally understand you about the spoil O-O

Thanks for saying they're cute though >-<
Just wait till you see yuki's other dress :-)

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Children|Drama|KN|BxG)

Posted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 9:10 am
by Coren
Yuki's other dress is adorable! :P

Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Drama|Child Protag)

Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 10:27 am
by Coren
Commissioned an image for the bonus screen from Jenelim:
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Re: Six Rules (Heian Japan|Feud|Drama|Child Protag)

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 9:06 pm
by Coren
Update: All art is done as of now! :) Writing's almost done as well - waiting for music.