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Pyrite Heart [Otome] [Screenshot & Dakimakura]
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 11:17 pm
by KomiTsuku
Plot: When a feud with her brother gets too hot, Princess Ahri Remono, a young woman with a heart of fire, accepts a challenge that she cannot thrive in the world outside the Imperial Palace. In her first day in class, the boisterous princess finds a potential rival in the student body president, Asaio Hayashi. Moving to assert her dominance, Ahri challenges the young man to a series of contests. When each of them end inconclusively, she challenges him to the one thing she hopes he can't be good at, a cook-off. When her rival cheerfully accepts, the young princess realizes that she may have gotten in way over her head.
Characters:
Name- Ahri Remono
Age- 17
Gender- Female
Bio- The Emperor's youngest daughter. Proud and stubborn, Ahri often challenges those around her to contests of intelligence and will. As the Emperor's daughter, few accept these challenges, leading her to have an inflated ego. Brilliant and determined, Ahri won't settle for anything less than being the best there is.
Name- Kichiro Remono
Age- 25
Gender- Male
Bio- The eldest son of the Emperor. While Kichiro loves his little sister, he finds her self-absorbed attitude grating and often bickers with her. Kichiro is the only person who accepts his sister's challenges, and often is the only one who is able to beat her.
Name- Takao Torii
Age- 17
Gender- Male
Bio- A long-time servant of Ahri. He loves Ahri like a sister, even if she tends to ignore him. When she decided to prove her brother wrong, he asks if he can go along to watch over her. Cheerful, energetic, and a bit naïve, Takao does everything he can to support Ahri. These attempts often end in chaos, but he keeps doing whatever she asks.
Name- Asaio Hayashi
Age- 18
Gender- Male
Bio-The current class president. Regarded highly be everyone for his cool demeanor under pressure, his charming looks, and his sharp intellect. Asaio runs numerous clubs and sports, letting him meet many people but develop friendships with few. When Ahri arrives at his school, he sees a potential rival for the first time in his school career.
An example from the game:
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Length: 1-2 hours
2 Romancible boys
6 Endings
This will NOT be a commercial release. It will be free.
Expected to release in the April/May timeframe!
Delayed until late June/July
The team has decided to have a special lottery. After the release, we will be holding a lottery for a few dakimakura being made for the game! Here's the front art for one of them, our sexy Asaio.
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 11:22 pm
by Lachez
Characters and art looks ngreat, I'll have to check it out when it's released! ^^
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 12:09 am
by k_arashi
Wow, very lovely art! <333
I'm super excited for this project!
The characters and premise look very interesting~! (:
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 3:55 am
by v3-kei
Your lining is one of the best I have seen OAO
The coloring seems a bit orange heavy though, I feel a bit hotter than I am comfortable woth, looking at the sprites. But I like the premise of the story! Good luck!
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 11:08 am
by Aseret
Loving the art, it looks so professional and amazing
You said it's commercial and that's totally fine.
However, I believe the length (1-2 hours) is much too short for a commercial release in my opinion.
Other than that, good luck!
Edit: Okay, when I look back on this, I take some of it back. I now realize there are other commercial games that are kinda short too aha. Regardless, the art really wins me over xD
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 1:25 pm
by teacup
I would have mistaken that art for a professional Japanese otome game (which is probably the highest compliment I give).
Since the game will be short, do you have any ideas for the price?
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 3:07 pm
by AkaMika
I love your charaters !! Your are a pro !
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 4:19 pm
by borisoda
I agree with teacup, art looks phenomenal!
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 4:47 pm
by Rikka
HHHHHHHNNNNNGGGGG
This looks top-notch. *__*
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 3:24 am
by KomiTsuku
Thanks everyone for your support. While I'd love to bask in your praise, I am not the artist
(my art is known to cause blindness from the awfulness of it). I am but a simple writer. I will make sure she know how much you like it though. ^_^
teacup wrote:Since the game will be short, do you have any ideas for the price?
We are still working that, I should have a number for you soon.
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 12:19 pm
by gogospirit
I'm very interested in this~! The artwork is gorgeous and I really love the character designs! <3333
Does the artist have a deviantart account, by any chance? If so, I'd love to know it!
I'm looking forward to this with great anticipation~!
I wish you the best of luck with this project! (:
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 7:28 pm
by Nisa-chan666
Oh wow
The art you have thus far is fantastic, so I'm really excited to see what else you come out with.
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 10:47 am
by try10
The art is gorgeous. I love the sprites. Everyone looks so great that I can't choose a favourite yet.XD
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 11:54 am
by shilkefair
this looks amazing!!*A*
Re: Pyrite Heart [Otome]
Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 11:42 pm
by ixWishing
Omg, I love the art!
It's so professional & it's gorgeousss <3
I'm already loving Takao Torii already xD <3