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Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 12:03 pm
by ixWishing
Aww! The art is super cute!
I hope it won't include (too many) French phrases or words, haha.
I'm rusting down in my French XD
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 5:24 am
by cookiestruck
Didules wrote: I love the text box with the Eiffel Tower, it's really nice! Really "France" I guess X)
And the background is nice too, it's the main character's bedroom? Or just a temporary stuff?
Glad you like the text box!
Well, it's the main character's bedroom. And I if it fits the sprites and stuffs perfectly, I will keep using it. ^^
ixWishing wrote:Aww! The art is super cute!
I hope it won't include (too many) French phrases or words, haha.
I'm rusting down in my French XD
Thanks! Well, only some known French words and phrases to give some kind of... well, French-feel? xD
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 5:37 am
by Mimi_Melody
Oh, red hair dude

And he's even a rude one

I'm starting to like this more and more.
Haha, I love the Eiffel Tower as well! So...."France". So you're going to use that for the bedroom's BG right? I'm asking 'cuz I love blue

Now that I have a good look at Eri in the game, I think she looks so cute (not that she wasn't cute before, it's just with the big in-game screenshot, she looks cuter :3)

Keep up the great work!
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 8:16 am
by Ran08
Awww, the art is really lovely~ Ooooh, I love the red-haired dude.
Ahem, anyway, I forgot to notice something. ^^ I absolutely love the height measurements!

I myself am a 167 cm tall 15 year old girl and I am considered tall in my country. ^^ And honestly? When I was younger I felt uncomfortable with that height. XD I'm glad that this protagonist is 170cm! It's awesome that I could totally relate to her since we're almost the same height.
Good luck to the developers!

Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 3:12 pm
by cookiestruck
Mimi_Melody wrote:Oh, red hair dude

And he's even a rude one

I'm starting to like this more and more.
Haha, I love the Eiffel Tower as well! So...."France". So you're going to use that for the bedroom's BG right? I'm asking 'cuz I love blue

Now that I have a good look at Eri in the game, I think she looks so cute (not that she wasn't cute before, it's just with the big in-game screenshot, she looks cuter :3)

Keep up the great work!
Yeah, that will be the protagonist's bedroom. I certainly love blue too!

Glad that you think she looks cute! xD
Ran08 wrote:Awww, the art is really lovely~ Ooooh, I love the red-haired dude.
Ahem, anyway, I forgot to notice something. ^^ I absolutely love the height measurements!

I myself am a 167 cm tall 15 year old girl and I am considered tall in my country. ^^ And honestly? When I was younger I felt uncomfortable with that height. XD I'm glad that this protagonist is 170cm! It's awesome that I could totally relate to her since we're almost the same height.
Good luck to the developers!

Well, my height is almost 170 cm and it's also considered tall in my country. That's the main reason I made the protagonist's height 170 cm xD
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 3:34 pm
by cookiestruck
Update/Notices
Story
The story is progressing. My writer did a good job~ :'3
(Although I have to edit it again...)
I'm currently helping her by editing early parts of the story that's going to be released for the demo.
If I'm talking about demo, it doesn't mean it'll be soon. You know... writer block and artist block is everywhere ._.
Art
Trust me, I'm having a little bit trouble to find the right sprite poses. Sooo... forget about sprites. I'm currently doing backgrounds.
Eri (The protagonist) now has 4 set of clothes. Really... I have no idea why I did this. But I really love designing clothes ;-; This is bad...
or maybe not.
Just to make you happy, I'll just put screenshots of
the amazing text box and background. And I need your opinion. Do you like the background style? If you do, I'll keep it ^^
Others
Jessica is adding music~ Yaaaay!
And my current priority is the user interface and backgrounds.
Why? Because I can release the demo using stick guy as the sprites. And it shall be the most amazing game that ever exist.
Also, I'm having a bunch of tests in school start from 13 until 17 May. I might stop doing the project for these time. Or maybe just updating a little stuffs. (Like how I always do) xD
And there, have a picture of Mitchell.

Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 6:24 am
by NoahSindri
I can't wait that you guys finish it!
It looks amazing

Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 7:53 am
by Ran08
Awww, it looks really nice so far!

Looking forward to this. :3
However, can you um, maybe change the text color?

Juuust, maybe? It's kinda hard to read for me, but it's alright, perhaps it's just me. Haha. ^^
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Mon May 13, 2013 5:46 pm
by lilyrose
This really does look simply amazing

France may not be my favorite favorite country but it is indeed one of my favorites ;p The art looks amazing!!!!! The backgrounds look really good!!!!! and the main character is adorable :3 and it's and very intriguing story

can't wait for more!!!! :3
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Mon May 13, 2013 11:11 pm
by inhalance
Ahh the art and GUI look so cute and nice! ^^ I can't wait to see what you put out for your first project. Good luck!
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 6:29 am
by kuri_chii
NIce game

cant wait to the final product :3

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Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 6:33 am
by cookiestruck
NoahSindri wrote:I can't wait that you guys finish it!
It looks amazing

Thank you! We will try our best ^^
Ran08 wrote:Awww, it looks really nice so far!

Looking forward to this. :3
However, can you um, maybe change the text color?

Juuust, maybe? It's kinda hard to read for me, but it's alright, perhaps it's just me. Haha. ^^
Glad you like it

Well, it has a black outline. Is it still hard to read? I'll edit them if that's so~ ^^
lilyrose wrote:This really does look simply amazing

France may not be my favorite favorite country but it is indeed one of my favorites ;p The art looks amazing!!!!! The backgrounds look really good!!!!! and the main character is adorable :3 and it's and very intriguing story

can't wait for more!!!! :3
Thank you! We will post more updates later ^^
inhalance wrote:Ahh the art and GUI look so cute and nice! ^^ I can't wait to see what you put out for your first project. Good luck!
Thank you very much! ^^
kuri_chii wrote:NIce game

cant wait to the final product :3
Thank you very much! ^^
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Current updates:
I have to pause this project for a while. The final exam will be held for like... 2 more weeks or so. I need to focus on them. But after that, I'll be completely free!
I hope so. 
It doesn't mean I don't make any progress during the next 3 weeks. I might write more scenes when I get random inspirations :3
Also... I need proofreader(s). o -o
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN] -In short hiatus-
Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 11:03 am
by cookiestruck
I have a thought to change Eri's sprite. Well actually, I was just sketching randomly. And turns out I'm sketching Eri. ^^"
What do you think? Which one should I keep?
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Updates!
Good news~ My writer is start to write again :3 I forgot to give you a notice that her laptop was somewhat troubled. But well, it's good that she start writing again. ^^
Added Beatrice in the main thread. She'll be your senior. I'll show a sketch of her later. ^^
Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 11:57 am
by Mimi_Melody
Well I like the old Eri. Not sure though, since you haven't colored it. But I think the old one looks cuter

Re: Je T'aime [Otome] [GxB] [VN]
Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 3:18 pm
by filsduloup
Coucou !!!
I am french and is interesting that the project is located in paris !
I think the heroine should visit the place as Pere Lachaise cemetery, instead of trocadero or you have a beautiful view of the Eiffel Tower. But also to show the annoyance of paris, the dirty metro and break the stereotypical idea of paris.
romantic place:
- Trocadero (beautiful view of the Eiffel Tower)
- The father Lachaise cemetery (i know is very strange to have a cimetary as romantic place)
- Boat trip on the Seine
normally people do not dress uniform to go to school, on the other hand has nothing prevents a student to come in uniform if he so desires!
tu veut quoi comme genre de phrase en français ?
What you want as a kind of sentence in French?
Mitchell is not a french name, maybe mitchell is not french
I think that can not have a game on France not to mention three things:
- Wine (a pride for the French, wine knowledge is a sign of sophistication and elegance) the sound a little young to drink wine boys, ca might be fun for the first time for the heroine.
- Bread (a food that is present each meal)
- The French are grumpy