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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]
Aww man this looks awesome. Love the art :3 Gonna be getting me this as soon as it's available!
Personally I don't mind profanity when I'm playing a VN - Kinda makes it seem more realistic IMO for some reason.
I do have a question about Miyahara Nanase though... Can i totally steal him? I swear I'll give him a good home! I mean look at him - he's just sooo adorable >.<
Personally I don't mind profanity when I'm playing a VN - Kinda makes it seem more realistic IMO for some reason.
I do have a question about Miyahara Nanase though... Can i totally steal him? I swear I'll give him a good home! I mean look at him - he's just sooo adorable >.<
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LOL He sure is getting a lot of fans.MinaThomas wrote:Aww man this looks awesome. Love the art :3 Gonna be getting me this as soon as it's available!
Personally I don't mind profanity when I'm playing a VN - Kinda makes it seem more realistic IMO for some reason.
I do have a question about Miyahara Nanase though... Can i totally steal him? I swear I'll give him a good home! I mean look at him - he's just sooo adorable >.<
Thanks for the compliments
So I guess slang and such isn't much of an issue either?
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Hmm, again with my personal opinion, I don't think there's anything wrong with it, especially if you'll be using it as a defining feature for a character. If you are a little worried about it though, you could always just stick to the more commonly known slang terms if you get what I mean.kiirome wrote:So I guess slang and such isn't much of an issue either?
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]
How about this.MinaThomas wrote: LOL He sure is getting a lot of fans.
Thanks for the compliments
So I guess slang and such isn't much of an issue either?
Would it make sense for this certain character to say profanity often?
Is he just an young angry teenager who can't clean his mouth with soap? It makes sense that he says bad words such as 'retard' and such if he has trouble keeping his dirty mouth shut.
If you're going for a character who acts like that, then its OK based on the media you're going for.
Just make sure to show that they are like that and dont make it feel forced. Don't be a shadow.
Also, don't let everyone go off saying 'Retard' and such unless they are all young angry teenagers who have a bad yapper as well.
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Yup, of course not. They won't all be like that. It's pretty much only him, and he's the kind of character that's incapable of saying nice things.How about this.
Would it make sense for this certain character to say profanity often?
Is he just an young angry teenager who can't clean his mouth with soap? It makes sense that he says bad words such as 'retard' and such if he has trouble keeping his dirty mouth shut.
If you're going for a character who acts like that, then its OK based on the media you're going for.
Just make sure to show that they are like that and dont make it feel forced. Don't be a shadow.
Also, don't let everyone go off saying 'Retard' and such unless they are all young angry teenagers who have a bad yapper as well.
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]
*reads over this thread*
...Well, there goes my summer...
*waits patiently for the release*
...Well, there goes my summer...
*waits patiently for the release*
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]
Whoa, the art is really cute!
Im liking the story already!
Im liking the story already!
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]
Yep, backtracking big time. I think I'm going to redo all the bgs, make them a little nicer. cheatingwithsketchup
It's nicer this way right?:D
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I like it! It matches the color schemes of the characters better. The other backgrounds are kind of cluttered because of all the colors and it made the characters stand out less.
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A VN including solving a mystery involving flowers, gorgeous art and bg's, and from what I've seen from the screen shots a script with sarcasm and tons of laughter? Yes, I'm interested. I wish you good luck with this!
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This looks like it will be an amazing game! Keep up the great work!
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]
This is looking lovely so far I adore the art *u* I'm going to try and get that glasses guy when I play honhonhon~
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]Hi
Expected time of completing the game?? <:3
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]Hi
Hmm I don't really have a deadline or anything, but currently writers block is holding it back ; _ ; Not too sure how long this will take OTL.
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Re: Pastel Blue [GxB][NPC BxB][Otome, School Life, Comedy]Hi
Writer's block isn't something you can fight against, I understand that and can only sympathize with you ^^ I'm currently in the same case and the only thing I could say is: "keep thinking about something else, multiply the experiences IRL and one day or another you'll think "hey I could add that to my visual novel!"" At least that's what I do and it works ^^"kiirome wrote:Hmm I don't really have a deadline or anything, but currently writers block is holding oit back ; _ ; Not too sure how long this will take OTL.
Since this game seems to be great, I don't think anybody cares if we have to wait a little bit before the release
Good luck!! (And if you need any help of some sort, remember there are plenty of people ready to help you with your project )
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